[Original High School Entrance Examination Questions]
2022 Henan High School Entrance Examination Composition Questions
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Read the following materials and write a composition according to the requirements. (50 points)
(1) In life, sounds are everywhere. It can be the sounds of everything we hear, or various messages we hear or see. Which of these sounds is the most memorable to you? Please write a narrative essay with the title "The Voice Remaining in the Heart". Requirements: ① The intention should be clear and the content should be specific and substantial. ②About 600 words. ③Please avoid names of people, schools, and places related to you in the article.
(2) In the information age, everyone can be a "sound generator". How should we make our own voices heard, and how should we deal with various different voices? Please choose your own angle, draft your own topic, and write a simple argumentative essay to express your thoughts. Requirements: ① Clear views and well-founded opinions. ②About 600 words. ③Please avoid names of people, schools, and places related to you in the article.
[Testing Ideas]
The 2022 Henan High School Entrance Examination essay is a choice between narrative and argumentative essays. Today we will analyze the narrative proposition.
This is a proposition composition that provides materials. It is not difficult to review the topic and conception. Write a narrative essay with the title "The Voice that Remains in My Heart". "Sound" is the central word. The material says "it can be the sound of all things we hear, or the various information we hear or see." That is, it can be "voice with sound" or "sound." Silent Voices”. Specifically, we should pay attention to the following points:
① "Stay in the bottom of my heart" is very important, indicating that this kind of voice has greatly touched the author and left it fresh in the author's memory. It points to the past, not the ongoing process, and it is not an imagination of the future. This is the "tense" requirement of the composition. You must focus on the past and write memories.
② Articles can be written in real terms and have audible sounds. For example, you can write about the spiritual impact and aesthetic feelings brought about by hearing the sound of books, wind and rain, teaching, music, etc.; you can also write about silent sounds. For example, certain scenes in an art work (a painting, a poem, etc.) are transformed into auditory feelings, thereby entering the aesthetic realm.
③The sound written should be infectious and shocking; the "voice" expressed should not be vulgar or unhealthy, and the feeling of the sound should be profound.
④ Because the proposition has no quantitative limit on "sound", it can be one, one type, or multiple or related types. Of course, as a narrative of six to seven hundred words, if it is written as "multiple" and "various", the article will lose its breadth of materials, thus affecting the depth of the article and the clear expression of the main idea.
⑤ In terms of theme expression: it can express true love, such as parents' advice and friends' encouragement; it can express feelings about family and country, such as the widely circulated phrase "This prosperous age is as you wish" in the 70th anniversary of the founding of the People's Republic of China; it can Showing responsibility, such as "Fortunately, with you, the mountains and rivers are safe" during the epidemic, Master Hou urging the driver to "get out of the car quickly" under the tunnel during the flood; it can also be aesthetic experience, such as the sound of falling snow in winter, the sound of rain in summer, The sound of falling leaves in the autumn wind, the shock brought by the song "The Lonely Warrior", the touching brought by the movie "King Kong River "... As long as you can capture the sound and write your true feelings, the kinetic energy will stir the sensitive heartstrings of the marking teacher. , playing the sound that remains in my heart. It is an excellent examination essay.
[Excellent composition]
The voice that stays in the bottom of my heart
(Student composition, revised by teacher)
The journey of life is full of ups and downs, but along the way, there is always a song that will always flow in the bottom of my heart, which is the spiritual melody performed by life. "Go? Go! Fight with the humblest dream. Fight? Fight! Fight with the most lofty dream..." Whenever "The Lonely Warrior" sounds in my ears, my blood always boils with excitement, so that tears fill my eyes.
A young man loves his dream, what was yesterday is not what it is today
As a junior high school student with "all-round development and proficiency in Chinese", throughout the whole school year of junior high school, I still played chess, calligraphy and painting, danced and sang as usual, and opened up my beloved "A Dream of Red Mansions ", and... It took me half a night to watch, the class "Youth Style" debate competition, I killed everyone and won the applause of the whole house, the grade "Sound for You" singer competition, I sang more and more bravely, ranked among the top three, the school has five clubs, active My energetic figure... Over the past year, my academic performance has dropped again and again, until math and English fell to the quagmire, and physics and chemistry became as low as dust. He was once a hero wearing armor and taking center stage, but now he can only whimper and hesitate in the dark night.
The years are undefeated, and I am getting stronger.
The second grade of junior high school is a new beginning. "I love you walking alone in a dark alley, I love the way you don't kneel, I love you who have stood up to despair and refused to cry... Are you going? Are you worthy? Do you want to fight in this ragged cloak? Fight! With the humblest dream." , at this time, "The Lonely Warrior" sounded in my ears for the first time. I knew that this was my war song and would remain in my heart. From then on, eating became the medal of my youth. How many nights, how many summers and colds come and go, every time I sweat like rain, every time I wander in the dark night, with loneliness as my company, with loneliness as my companion, I write my sword on the road to the end of the world, fight decisively on the top of the green peak, have great ambitions in my heart, and cross thousands of mountains with ease. Every time I take an exam, when I walk into the examination room, load my pen and ink, use the test paper as my frontier, gallop forward, my spirit is high, I condense my dreams on the tip of my pen, and use my results to strive for my own glory. In the first semester, he gradually entered the middle class, and by the middle of the second semester, he was among the top ten in the class.
Time condenses, and the years become poems.
Midsummer is full, the leaves become poems, June is like fire, and the struggle is endless. Now I am sitting in the examination room, full of ambition, holding my head high, and traveling around the world. Outside the window, there is a clear blue sky and a warm sun. "Are you going?...Fight!..." The song "The Lonely Warrior" is the voice that remains in my heart! (680 words)
