Why do you always have ups and downs in your study? Because there are always ten thousand ways to hit me critically.
During the process of accompanying the study, my mother gradually accepted her fate. After all, the growth of the child must conform to certain natural laws and not be transferred by human will.
cannot change the time, so let’s reconcile yourself! Lower expectations and gain surprises. If you don’t have enough IQ, forgive him! English, speaking is still good, take your pen slowly! Chinese, hey, it is the universe, but what I cannot bear most is composition! A junior high school student’s composition is as naive and unreasonable as a primary school student. Alas, I forced me to sort out the “several sins” of primary school students’ compositions.
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typo
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The typos of primary school students is understandable. When they can't write it, they use another homophone instead, and then hahaha... For example, this article -
Chinese characters themselves are very magical. Some typos, coincidentally appearing in one place will cause ridiculous scenes.
For example, this kid is so reluctant, so the "resentment" overflows from the paper unstoppable.
And this kid not only forgot how to write the word "sub" but also forgot the pronunciation of the word "pi". There are also good things in the world that force you to be a principal, I am afraid it is not in my dream. Baby, wake up!
typos are to Chinese, just like wrong questions are to mathematics. It is also an existence that will be eliminated.
If you want fewer typos, on the one hand, you need to practice more, check more, and ask more .
Practicing calligraphy is a traditional way to learn Chinese characters. Practice writing and be familiar with the framework structure, stroke order, and brush stroke method of Chinese characters.
When you encounter a word that you can’t understand, you need to look up the dictionary, dictionary, or ask the teacher or parents.
On the other hand, the so-called is related to the context . The context of a word is to form a word with other words. understands a word through different vocabulary and remembers it more deeply.
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written the pinyin
sddling the pinyin
slow students write essays. Words that cannot be written can be replaced by pinyin. But some children can also write the pinyin incorrectly. If you say it seriously, this can be regarded as a "typo".
The pinyin used by this child from Xiantao, Hubei, is obviously all with an accent. This is not a win question. I am very optimistic about you to talk about a talk show!
However, it can be seen that this kid has learned the pinyin very well. The word "jió" is spelled very standard, with the initial consonant, final vowel, and tone.
Coincidentally, a child from Yixing, Jiangsu also wrote a pinyin with an accent.
Turn (zhuan) body → juan body
Hanging (liang) clothes → lang clothes
Tolkien The boss invented the elf language. These children can continue to work hard in this direction, and maybe they can invent a set of ancient immortals and gods elegant languages.
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Compare word count
Compare word count
The ultimate representative of writing composition stumble fish is compare word count. Although the page of is full, writing it means not writing it.
The simplest way to make up the word count is to really make up the word. has no feelings at all, it is all skills.
Level is a little higher than a single word. If you write a few more words and arrange them, it will appear staggered.
This kid wrote about grandpa’s birthday, and all relatives at home came, and four generations lived together. In one sentence, he introduced all his relatives one by one. He must have grown up watching " Dream of Red Mansions ".
by the way, they basically achieved the third-child indicator in advance.
classic cross talk " registration name ", which is applied to the composition routine of word-making, can be "register name" .
The child above just uses numbers and arranging combinations, and the child below is the real "reporter name". I remember all the names of
and have not written them incorrectly. Child, everyone has seen your efforts!
The highest-level word count is probably just because I saw it, but it seemed that I didn’t get it, and it was so fake that it was real.
OK, now the teacher knows how boring you are after class, it seems that there is less homework assignment.
baby! Let's observe a moment of silence for your last boring life that is about to pass away! Welcome the critical strike of homework!
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stacked idiom
stacked idiom
The composition is not long and needs to be filled in the number of words. It may be that the idiom is used too much.
Idiom is used a lot, and the composition looks very literary at first glance. But if only knows how to stack idioms, the details of the article will be gone, not vivid enough, and it will easily fall into the surface.
Especially primary school students who are learning idioms, the amount accumulated is not enough, so there are only a few used, and everyone is using them.
What is cloudless, the wind is bright, the peach blossoms are red, the willows are blooming, the flowers are blooming, the spirit is bright, the heart is relaxed, the spirit is bright, the dejected, the crowd is crowded, the night is quiet, the sky is high and the clouds are light... These idioms have been used indiscriminately.
Use your own language to describe your feelings and moods, which not only makes it easier to impress readers, but also deepens children's understanding and perception of life.
I also watched a video before. Yu Qiuyu said in an interview that I read a book when I was young. It was a letter from Lao She to young writers. It mentioned "try to use idioms as few as possible" and try to use your own vivid language.
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structure is scattered
This is not a small problem, but an overall thinking problem. Many primary school students have written essays for several years, but they still don’t understand what the essay is. They only know how to write hundreds of words according to the requirements.
is either recorded as a record, or abruptly interspersed with several memorized examples, or off topic in the middle... The overall structure of the article is very chaotic. Moreover, this is not a problem for primary school students. Junior high school, high school and even college students may make such mistakes when faced with compositions of different topics.
The best solution to this is to practice writing more and write more easily.
For example, when writing an outline, you must clarify: what kind of narrative method is used (order? flashback? Is it incisive), whether to arrange a clue (emotion? Things? People?), and whether you need an inscription? Where is the climax part arranged?
Watch talk show, and then summarize the routines of writing essays! Some writing skills have been introduced.
Total scores are always very useful~
Although it summarizes some common problems in primary school students writing essays, this is not all. After all, the kid has endless ideas and is a beginner, so it is really hard to predict what kind of work he wrote in the end.
Before watching " Annual Comedy Competition ", there was a performance about elementary school students' compositions. It was really a reappearance of the scene. I strongly recommend
poorly written essays. Not only will you ask for the teacher's umbrella (ming), but you can also ask for your mother's umbrella (ming).
After all, the critical hits that my mother endured not only come from composition, but also from other subjects, various homework and exams.
If you want to write a good essay with true feelings, you must not only understand and skillfully build the framework of the essay, but also have knowledge. It is a yearning for the great rivers and mountains, stars and seas, and an insight into the changes of ancient and modern times, and the ups and downs of the world.
Life is a long scroll that can be written endlessly. When he has his own experience, he will no longer "come new words", but will instead "know that the weather is cool and the autumn is so cold."
