The second volume of the seventh-grade edition of the People's Education Press approved by the Ministry of Education selected Li Senxiang's novel "Stairs", but the publisher failed to pass the proofreading. On page 12, there are two punctuation errors in one paragraph. This is th

The second volume of the seventh grade People's Education Press edition approved by the Ministry of Education selected Li Senxiang 's novel "Stairs", but the publisher did not pass the proofreading. On page 12, there are two punctuation errors in one paragraph. This is the third to last paragraph (see the picture below). "Sitting on the steps very tired" should be followed by a comma, and "coming down all winter" should also be followed by a comma. These are all uncontroversial, but now they are all black spots.

Textbooks for children should be proofread more carefully and more seriously! This is a textbook, not general reading. There are two punctuation errors in one natural paragraph. How can this be done?

In addition, the second natural paragraph of this novel said: "The stone slabs were carried down from the mountain by my father many years ago. Each piece weighs about three hundred kilograms. The stonemason smiled and held it on his father's shoulders, saying that it could He carried the stone slabs home without charge. As a result, my father carried it three times without feeling that it took too much effort. "Is it possible for one person to carry a stone slab weighing more than 300 kilograms from the mountain to his home?" Arrive? I doubt it can be done. What do your friends think? I think that even if it is a novel, it should be written in line with common sense.