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expressed her envy of my handwriting and expressed the hope that her children could learn it too. So I asked her to send her the calligraphy written by the child, and we would study together. The comments are as follows:
My son's comment on the post : 1. All the words are like a strong wind in the upper left corner, and it feels like being blown to the right. Can you feel it for yourself? It's because your vertical strokes are all slanting downward to the left. If you write straight, the words will stand firm.
2, servant, and even, these two words, when they belong to the left, vertical or right, the vertical on the right should be longer than the vertical on the left, the characters will look better, you can try it. That is, the vertical length of "Bu" and "Shi", and the vertical one next to a single person is slightly shorter.
3. You wrote that both sides are the same length. Try making the vertical painting on the right longer than the bow on the left. It will look much better.
4, white, old, two characters, the horizontal drawing in the middle of the word "mouth" should be connected with the vertical drawing on the left, not the vertical drawing on the right, so it is standardized to write it like this.
5. Come on, the short words on the left look better if they are written vertically. Please pay attention to the word stickers.
I have to read the post carefully before writing it to be accurate. But it is very good to write it like this for the first time. I will try my best again.
Comments on Tang poetry written by his son : The overall font is powerful and serious. But because the vertical strokes are all drifting to the left, the characters are not stable. Just write vertically straight.
1. Chui: Note that this is a pictographic character. The original meaning of this character is the crown of the tree. Pay attention to the crown of the big tree. It is the widest in the middle. Therefore, the longest horizontal stroke of this character should be The middle stroke, and the bottom stroke should be the shortest.
2, 自,白,日, are the same as the problem of Lin copybook. The small short horizontal in the middle should be connected with the vertical on the left. This is the correct way to write.
3, river, the top horizontal line is shortened, so it looks like the lid of this word has been bitten.
Daughter Lin’s copybook comments:
1, inches, and ten thousand, the top and bottom of the two words need to be written flat to look good, especially not to be written upward.
2. No, this is a pictographic character. The original meaning of this character is a grass about to sprout. Therefore, the point on the right cannot be connected to the intersection of the left and the vertical, but should be connected to the vertical. It is the root. The meaning of must.
Homework: 1. Each person will post one page per day. The post is required to be drawn one stroke at a time, and you must read it clearly before writing. You don’t have to leave your assignments to me.
2. A poem: Spring Dawn Meng Haoran
I sleep in spring without realizing the dawn, and I hear the singing of birds everywhere.
The sound of wind and rain comes at night, and you know how many flowers have fallen.
once a day, and the one on Saturday was sent to me for review. How's that? I hope the two siblings will do their best.
