Dongjin Experimental Middle School Li Yanjun
There is a question:
The article "Bamboo Junren" has a distinctive language characteristics. Try to choose any angle to appreciate it in combination with the article. Language appreciation questions like
often appear in Chinese tests of all sizes. Many children are either tigers chewing on the sky, have no idea of answering questions, are unable to answer the questions, are unable to understand the key points, are incomplete, and throw away their soldiers and armor in vain, unable to compete for the Central Plains. How to do this kind of question in
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The author believes that the appreciation of language must be able to hold "what are the language characteristics" in your brain to extract it from the "warehouse" of the brain. What are the characteristics of
language? After looking up various materials, the statements are different. I summarized them into the following main aspects:
is fresh, just not out of the ordinary.
such as Lao She 's " Grassland ", the beginning of which describes the beautiful scenery you saw when you first entered the grassland: "This time, I saw the grassland. The sky there is more lovely than elsewhere, the air is so fresh, and the sky is so bright that I always want to sing a song to express my joy. Under the sky, it is a thousand miles away but not vast. There are hills on all sides, the flat ground is green, and the hills are also green. The flock of sheep climbs on the hills and then comes down. Wherever you walk, it looks like a boundless green blanket. The white flowers are embroidered. The lines of those small blood are so soft, just like the Chinese painting rendered only with green and not with ink lines. The green color flows everywhere and gently flows into the clouds. This state is both amazing and comfortable. I want to stand all the time and look around for a long time, and I want to sit down and chant a beautiful poem. In this state, even the horse and the big cow sometimes stand still, as if they are savoring the infinite fun of the grassland. "The author uses exquisite metaphors and the combination of movement and stillness to write the grassland that is a thousand miles green with exquisite and passionate, and not vulgar. This is the characteristic of Mr. Lao She's fresh language.
is simple, it is not decorated and approachable.
Let’s take Mr. Lao She’s "Prairie" as an example: “In addition to the yurt, there are many horses and many cars. There are many people, and they all come to see us from dozens of miles away to ride horses or carriages. The owners got off the horses and we got off the car. I don’t know whose hand it was, but they always hold it warmly and hold it. Everyone’s language is different, but the heart is the same. You say yours, I say mine, the general meaning is national unity and mutual assistance.
Somehow, he went into the yurt. The milk tea was poured on, and the milk tofu was placed on, and the host and the guest sat cross-legged. Everyone was polite, and everyone was so intimate, without any restraint. After a while, the hospitable host brought in the large plate of to grab mutton . The cadre toasted us, and the 70-year-old man toasted us. We saluted, the host raised his glass again, and we saluted again. At this time, the Ewenki " girls wore pointed hats, which were generous and a little shy, came to sing folk songs to the guests. The singers who were with us also started singing quickly. The singing seemed to be louder and more touching than any language. No matter what they were singing, the listener would always smile knowingly. "These two passages use documentary descriptions and do not beautify them, but express the simplicity, enthusiasm of the grassland people and the unity and friendship among all ethnic groups.
gorgeous means the literary talent.
We take Gibran 's " Song of Flowers " as an example: "I am the words of nature. Nature speaks it, then take it back, hide it in my heart, and then say it again...
I am a star, falling from the sky into the green grass.
I am the daughter of all elements: winter brings me to birth, spring makes me open, summer makes me grow, and autumn makes me fall asleep.
I am a gift for the interaction between relatives and friends, I am the crown of the wedding, and I am the last sacrifice given to the dead by the living.
Early in the morning, I welcomed it with the morning breeze; in the evening, I saw it off with the birds.
I sway in the field, making the scenery of the field more beautiful; I breathe in the breeze, making the breeze fragrant and fragrant. When I slept slightly, millions of bright eyes from the starry sky in the night looked at me; when I woke up, the huge one-eyed eyes from the day stared at me.
I drank the nectar made of morning dew, listened to the birds singing and singing; I danced, and the grass applauded me. I always look up at the sky and yearn for the light; I never pity myself and do not admire myself. And humans have not yet fully understood these philosophies. "This poem uses strange imagination and colorful rhetoric to describe the image of a flower that ignores one's own pity when one is frustrated, and does not admire one's positive flowers when one is proud.
concise, which means concise and not dragging on the mud.
Like the "Seven-character Code: Long March" written by our beloved Chairman Mao Zedong: " Red Army is not afraid of the difficulties of expeditions, and thousands of rivers are just free. The five ridges are winding and the waves are flowing, and the Wumeng is majestic and marching through the mud. The water of Jinsha strikes the clouds and the cliffs are warm, and the iron chains of Dadu Bridge are cold. I am even more happy that the snow in Minshan Mountains is full of snow after the three armies. "The "winding" and "thin waves" in the poem, "magnificent" and "milion balls", "warm" and "cold", the beginning of "only idle" and the ending "open the face", etc., can be said to be every word, and it is extremely concise, and it is impossible to change a word.
implicitness, which is intended to be out of words.
humor means using big words and small uses , exaggeration, metaphor, idiom methods, etc. make the language interesting.
vivid means using metaphorical personification and other rhetorical patterns to write people, things or objects, making people specific and touching.
uses short sentences, which means using short words and sentences to render an atmosphere. l1 "subtle", "humor", "vibrant" and "using short sentences" are the subtleties of the four language characteristics? Let's combine "Bamboo People" written by Mr. Fan Xilin to experience it:
When we were young, we made our own toys and could only make them ourselves. As long as one person made one Fresh things, everyone is interesting to watch, and it will soon become popular in the whole class and even the whole school.
For a while, we were all fascinated by the Douji people.
saw the pen stem into a long cut, this is the bamboo people's head and body, drill a pair of small eyes on it for arm installation. Saw eight more The truncated ones are made separately, and they are threaded together with a thread from the sole of the shoe. Be careful when you saw it. If you don’t make it cracked one by one, all your previous efforts will be wasted.
During that time, my mother blamed me for always losing my brush, while the old man who sold brushes at the school gate had a very good business.
ht The desk in the classroom is so worn out that it is impossible to tell the age. There are cracks on the desktop, like the Yellow River Yangtze River. If you accidentally, the pencil fell from the crack.
Now, these cracks are just for playing with bamboo knots.
Think carefully , the guy who invented this bamboo joint must have grown up on this kind of desk.
embedded the shoe line wearing nine bamboo joints into the crack of the desk. When he pulled it tightly, the bamboo joints standing on the crack stood in a hero, with their legs spreading their arms, majestic, similar to the young man with thick necks and lumps on his body in today's bodybuilding competitions.
loosens the shoe line and tightens the bamboo chords, and the bamboo chords will dance with their hands and move in the ground. When two bamboo chords are put together, they will fight, fight with their heads and minds, and they will never fall down.
Sometimes one of the lines is stuck, and the "fighter" will look stupid and stupid, and will be beaten with his stomach.
A popsicle stick tied to the hand of the bamboo joint, and it became the Sun Wukong holding the golden cudgel, known as the "Qiantian Little Saint". The four words are engraved on the back of the bamboo joint, showing aura!
found two discarded crochet on the knitting machine and put it in the hands of the bamboo joint man, and it became Douerdun tiger head double hook . Carved the "Golden Hook King" on the chest of Zhujie Man, showing off!
Cut a pair of Yanyue Knife with lead, tie a strand of red silk thread with iron wire to make an snake spear , install the bamboo joint man, and then try your best to get a more majestic, scary, and louder name.
Broken desk, like a powerful ancient battlefield. There were also classmates who were unique and wanted to be better at it, so they glued a head made of an eraser to the Zhujie Man and made a set of paper armor. Whenever I have the chance, I will proudly greet everyone to come and watch. Unexpectedly, he backfired and looked at it but was useless. After a few rounds, the sticky head and armor were knocked away by the big knife in its own hand, so the other party shouted victory.
In fact, the bamboo joint man's movements can't help but pull the informant to make the decision. It's just a random movement between the lines between the bamboo joints, but it looks quite like that. When
was finished, the classroom was held, attracting a circle of dark heads, watching the game, and stomping feet and clapping hands, howling, it was so lively. I often have to wait for the teacher to come in before I know that the class has begun, so I scattered the birds and beasts.
has been in class, but his mood is still unrestless. He is so itchy that he put the textbook in front of him as a screen and fights on the desk with his deskmate again. At this moment, his mouth is inconvenient.
But the students behind him were not tactful, and they were fascinated by the viewing. They stretched their necks and wished they could lean over our shoulders. The flaws were seen by the teacher who was eyeing him.
The teacher strode over and stretches out his hand angrily, and the "screen" fell down depressedly, and all the secrets were exposed. Needless to say, two bamboo gangers who had made great achievements after a lot of hard work were captured. After class, I saw other students start the war again and have fun. I couldn't help but feel depressed, so I sneaked into the holly bush under the office window, hoping that the teacher could pull away the confiscated things as usual and throw them out the window.
squatted, staring wide, but found nothing. Just as he was about to leave in disappointment, he saw his deskmate lying beside the window glass and watching with relish.
I also came over and looked over, oh, what did you see?
I saw the teacher playing with the bamboo chord man he had just collected on his desk. He pulled the thread in the drawer with his hands, muttered words in his mouth, focused and lost intently, noticing that we were peeking.
The expression on his face looked the same as when we were fascinated by it.
So, my deskmate and I smiled at each other. Although we were empty-handed, we were satisfied and slipped away gently.
The little resentment and depression just now disappeared.
We can appreciate the language characteristics of "Bamboo People" from the following aspects:
Language Euphemian Song, which is beyond words. For example, the sentence "The little resentment and depression just now turned into nothing", the implication is that "we" see the teacher's focused expression of playing bamboo chord people, exactly the same as "we". This makes “we” feel that the teacher and “we” have similar interests, are connected with each other in their hearts, and feel joy, satisfaction and pride in their hearts. The little resentment and depression will naturally disappear.
big words are useless and exaggerated and humorous. Words such as "great achievements" and "hard battles are still strong" are all big words, highlighting the fun of the game and increasing the humorous effect of the language.
uses rhetoric and vivid images.For example, "I often have to wait for the teacher to come in before I know that the class has begun, so I will scatter the birds and beasts." The rhetorical technique of metaphor is used to compare the children to "birds and beasts", and scatter in a row, vivid and humorous, and very realistic.
short sentences are used to create an atmosphere. For example, in the article, "The black tiger draws its heart! Mount Tai presses the top! Two dragons grab the pearl! Dongqiang Dongqiang Donggong Donggong! Donggongqiang!" The author used five short sentences in succession, five exclamation marks , and the use of onomatopoeia such as "dongqiang" to create a tense and intense atmosphere, highlighting the lively scene of children playing with bamboo festivals. The language features of
articles include "accurate, bold, graceful, and long sentences" and so on. I will not elaborate on them here.
It is worth mentioning that answering questions must be based on a certain pattern, otherwise you may miss the key points of the score. The general pattern of language characteristics is: what are language characteristics? Give examples one to two, and talk about the function from the content and structure (some first talk about the superficial meaning, then the deep meaning), which reflects the characteristics of the language of the article. Let’s take “Bamboo People” as an example:
Question: The article “Bamboo People” has distinctive language characteristics, so try to choose any angle to appreciate it in combination with the article.
Answer: The language is implicit and the intention is beyond words. For example, "During that time, my mother blamed me for always losing the brush, and the old man who sold the brush at the school gate had a very good business." This sentence "our" brush is used to be a bamboo-joint man. Because I made a lot of brushes, I "dumped" a lot of brushes, and of course the business of selling brushes would be good. The comparison between the two shows the secret joy and pride of "I". From the side, we express our obsession with bamboo people, and also express our children's naughty and cuteness, reflecting the implicitness of the language of the article.
What needs to be emphasized is that the language characteristics of the article must be combined with the full text to understand rather than break the sentences. (Note: Picture: Internet; refer to test materials: "Complete explanation of textbooks" and "Today's headlines")
