This year is the first year that Jiangsu implements the "3+1+2 New College Entrance Examination". It and seven other places, including Hunan, Guangdong, Shandong, Hebei and Fujian, use Paper I of the National New College Entrance Examination. It is said that when the essay questi

This year is the first year for Jiangsu to implement the "+1+2 new college entrance examination ". It and seven other places including Hunan, Guangdong, Shandong, Hebei and Fujian use the national new college entrance examination paper I . Among them, the title of the essay is a piece of material about the relationship between the three terms of Go: " expert, expert, ordinary player ".

2022 National New College Entrance Examination Paper I essay questions

It is said that when the New College Entrance Examination Paper I essay questions were circulated in the society, they were violently criticized. Many people believed that these three esoteric Go terms were deeply "deep" to the candidates. "Torture", many candidates who have not been exposed to Go are in a fog, do not know why, and have no way to write.

Recently, a college entrance examination essay suspected to have been written by Ding Runyang, a student from Yixing Middle School who was the top scorer in the Jiangsu College Entrance Examination this year, has been circulated on the Internet. After reading this sample essay, I seem to understand that it is no wonder that Ding can become the number one scholar in the province because he is bound to succeed (the college entrance examination score is 658 points)!

Let us take a look at the style of Zhuangyuanlang's articles.

Although it is currently impossible to conclusively prove that this is the work of the number one scholar. However, just looking at the neat scroll that can be called printing is so pleasing to the eye, it is impossible to give it a low rating!

and the title of the composition were very successful. It can be said to be "Zen" free and meaningful - " Diving with your own hands, traveling far with your masterful hands ". It closely follows the central idea and theme of the given material, and you can grasp it at once. It caught the eye of the examiner, and the score suddenly soared by 20 points+! After all, with a title that catches your mind, the article will be more than half successful!

If you look closely at the text, it is even more wonderful, which makes people marvel and admire it from the bottom of your heart!

The first sentence of the article starts with a clear meaning, "Life is like chess, and the game is ever-changing". There is no nonsense and it directly points out the main topic to be discussed in the article.

Then in the first paragraph, the author expands a little to explain the inner relationship between life and the chess game:

• (1). Play according to the ordinary chess principles, and gain an ordinary life;
• (2). Play chess ingeniously, and gain an exquisite life. Life;
• (3). If you rush for quick success and quick success, you will get a life where everything is lost..

The first paragraph of the article has successfully completed the task of starting an argumentative essay - letting the topic subtly enter the readers' hearts and leading people to continue reading along with the author's ideas with great interest.

Next, the author puts forward two sub-arguments to fully explain his proposition:

• ① Dive in with your own hands, seek truth and be pragmatic, and be down-to-earth;

• ② Go far with skillful hands, accumulate accumulated knowledge, and reach a higher level.

The analysis of the concepts is eloquently explained; the arguments are laid out slowly and . They are parallel, complementary, graceful and generous, logically rigorous and in-depth. How wonderful! The central argument of the article is perfectly demonstrated, and the core task of the argumentative article is successfully completed.

The author then extended this view and argument to the real world, and organically connected the two sub-arguments. This effectively avoids empty talk and empty talk, and at the same time cleverly avoids the minefield of scattered article structure and layout. can be relaxed and relaxed. can be relaxed and relaxed.

At the end of the article, it once again echoes the title of the article and provides a powerful summary of the main idea of ​​the article. It can be said that " chants three times ". At this point in the writing, the author calmly stops writing and concludes the whole article without any rush, leaving people with endless aftertaste after reading it and leaving them in reverie.

An article written on the spot during the college entrance examination. The time is extremely limited and the pressure is self-evident. However, it can have such a continuous and continuous structure and a rapid momentum. I can only say that the author is really amazing.

leopard head, pig belly, phoenix tail , the three elements of an excellent masterpiece are clearly visible in this article, which reflects that the author's writing skills are quite sophisticated, mellow and handy. In addition, the choice of words and sentences in the article is also very good. Some words are used very accurately, which shows that the author has a profound literary foundation!

This is a literary, ideological and logical excellent examination writing, which can be regarded as a model. Especially at such a young age, the author has a unique and new understanding of the world and life, with profound insights and insights, a broad perspective, and lofty intentions, which can't help but attract people's admiration.

What’s more worth mentioning is that Lang Ding, the number one scholar on the Internet, loves Go and is a good amateur five-dan player! No wonder, his thoughts and insights on " chess and life" are so profound and original, without falling into the stereotypes, let alone empty talk.

From this point of view, cultivating appropriate interests and hobbies will greatly promote students' learning.

Therefore, if I were to grade this article, in addition to the full score of 60, an additional 5 points would need to be given as a compliment and encouragement to the candidates for their quick thinking, rigorous logic, and neat writing.

Do you agree with this scoring standard?