Teacher Ying’s comment:
Well, judging from this article, Yiming is a "straight man in steel", especially the imagination in the last paragraph, which really makes me unable to complain. ——However, it can be seen that he has really worked hard. The teacher has adjusted the order of this article for you. You can also experience some deleted sentences yourself. If you don’t understand something, you can ask the teacher. As for why the teacher chose this article? It is because of the "reality" in the article, "sacrificing sleep for the children" and "stopping various cosmetics for the children", both of which are moving, yes, this is the mother!
True love is seen in the subtleties (Class 717 Lan Yiming)
Some people think that maternal love is like sunshine, taking away the cold of winter; some people think maternal love is like soil, bringing moisture and nutrition to plants; and I think maternal love is like a wealth tree . (Comment: This is very special, and it has successfully aroused the reader's interest.)
There is a window next to my desk, and there is a pot of wealthy trees outside the window. It is short and stout, with a appearance (change: appearance) is very simple, not as colorful as other flowers, but it impressed me.
One early morning, when I went to the bathroom, I suddenly saw (changed: found) It was drizzling outside the window, was silent and cool, (Comment: Can you tell why the teacher deleted it?) The pot of the rich tree was a little green. When I got closer, I found that there were several tender buds. Although the tender green color was not bright and simple (changed: but simple) , but against the background of this rain, is (changed: but also) is so green that it highlights the vitality of life. After going to the toilet, I looked at it again. There was a branch and leaf on the tender bud. The rainwater flowed through the leaf veins from the leaf tips and fell on the tender buds, and then on another tender bud. (As soon as possible,) The "drip" sound of the rice cooker in the kitchen caused a memory of my childhood.
My mother, she has always had a strange hobby - she likes to sleep. What surprised me was that she fell asleep at (supplement: can) at 10 pm , got up at 8 pm, if she could sleep until eleven o'clock on weekends, she could take a nap at noon, so she would sleep about every day (change: sleep enough every day) for twelve hours. But since I started studying, she has only slept for six hours. Why is that? She always takes care of my studies. She also does housework after checking my homework every night. She goes to bed until after twelve o'clock, but she often gets up at 6 o'clock every morning to prepare breakfast for our house. She shouldn't have suffered so much, but she still endured it. She just like the leaves of this wealthy tree that gave the little raindrops to the buds in order to make it grow better. (Supplement: Yes, just like my mother—)
Once I was reading a book, I heard my sister shouting, "Brother, come and see!" This is my mother's makeup bag. I thought it was nothing strange, "Everyone has a love for beauty!" But I picked up an eyebrow pencil and looked at it, Oh my God! The production date is May 19, 2018, with a shelf life of 3 years. This pen has expired, expired! I continued to look at the mask inside, and it was expired... These cosmetics were bought by my mother a few years ago, but they were all expired and had not bought new ones. She "smashed" the money on and I . This eyebrow pencil is only a few dozen yuan, but she bought us shoes worth hundreds of yuan, (supplement: it is not blinking,) buys it just by buying it. My mother said that the shoes should be worn comfortably and good for the body!
One day, when I was watching the scenery by the window, I suddenly realized, ah! Why did one or two leaves of this fortune tree turn yellow? Although I don’t take good care of it on weekdays, shouldn’t it turn yellow either? After careful observation, this is touching again! (change: the fortune tree in front of you,) The side facing the buds is all . The leaves are all green, the green is shiny, and the green is close to your eyes.However, some of the yellow and green on the left are connected, some are yellow in the corner, and some even have the whole leaves turn yellow. This is a very clear contrast! (Supplement: Maybe this is the greatness of maternal love, yes, just like my mother.)
If I were my mother's shadow, I would always be with my mother, let the shadow cast on the wall, help my mother work (change: fill my mother's loneliness) ; if I was a facial mask, I would spread it flat on my mother's face and replenish hydration on my mother's wrinkled face; if I was my mother's handbag, I would definitely reduce the burden on my mother; if I was a puppy, I would do anything for my mother! (change: a string of pearl necklace , and I can wear it on my mother's neck, making her look youthful and smiling like a flower.)
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