How to write an observation diary?
Classmate Wang raised his hand excitedly: "Teacher, observing the diary is to look at the things around you and write it down."
Teacher asked with a smile: "Can you give an example?"
Classmate Wang continued: "On Saturday afternoon, I saw a pot of tiger tail orchid at home. Its leaves are long and there is a circle of yellow edges around it. I poured it some water. It seems to be very happy."
Classmates burst into laughter.
Teacher asked: "Is there any problem with the observation diary of Wang?"
Student Li stood up and said: "Writing an observation diary, you must discover the secret of climbing up like Ye Shengtao , and you must also write the process of cricket nesting like Fabre . You can't see what you want and write what you just write."
Teacher nodded: "It's right! Observing a diary, observing the two words are not just looking at with your eyes. Students should learn to see with their eyes, listen with their ears, and feel with their bodies; most importantly, they should use your thinking, imagination and experience to write down the changes of a certain thing . "
" Teacher, what changes are there in things? "
" Good question! In addition to the changes in shape, size, color, birth, old age, sickness and death, things will also change with the changes in weather, time, and environment. For example, the ancient poem " A setting sun spreads in the water, half of the river is rustling and half of the river is red. "As the sun sets, the "color" of the river water changes interestingly, as if half of it turned green and half became crimson . For example, crickets are building nests and work very quickly at the beginning. When the important part is completed, it slows down. The rest is a long-term trimming. Do a little today and do a little tomorrow. "
After saying that, the teacher turned around and wrote on the blackboard:
45 plus + changes
Classmates, look at me, I look at you, I don't know what the teacher sells in gourd .
Seeing that everyone was puzzled, the teacher continued, "Do you still remember the 'five plus' I taught before to describe things?"
"I remembered it!" Student Liu raised his hand.
"Tell me."
" Lake water. plus adjective : microwaved lake water. plus quantity word : a rippling lake water. plus time, place, person : In the afternoon, my mother and I stroll by the lake, wow! A rippling lake water. plus feeling : In the afternoon, my mother and I stroll by the lake, wow! A rippling lake water, suddenly It makes people feel that the heat is driven away, and they are refreshed.
plus imagination : In the afternoon, my mother and I stroll by the lake, wow! A rippling lake water suddenly makes people feel that the heat is driven away, and they are refreshed. Stop under a willow tree. I looked at the lake in a daze. At this moment, I seemed to be swinging a small boat, floating on the lake. The green mountains in the distance are like Xi Shi's eyebrows, elegant and beautiful; the cruise ships nearby chase and play with each other, as if greeting me: "Hello! Welcome to join the self-rowing competition. "The rumbling drum sound seemed to be heard in my ears, "Come on! come on! "Crying sounds one after another..."
The students couldn't help but applaud.
Teacher smiled and nodded, signaling classmate Liu to sit down.
" students, this method can be used to write observation diary, and write changes, your diary will definitely be better . Try it now."
Quiet in the classroom.
After a while, Xiao Zhang handed over an observation diary:
In the afternoon, I found that the green ivy at home seemed listless.The leaves drooped, as if asking me for help: "I'm so thirsty! I'm so thirsty!" I leaned closer and looked at it. The leaves were a little dry, losing their luster, like a malnourished child, pitiful. Even the buds on the top turned yellow.
I hurriedly ran to ask my mother if it was time to water it. Mom said, "Yes, everyone is busy with their own things during this period, and no one cares about the green ivy. In addition, the weather is dry and hot, so it is easy to wither." Before my mother finished her words, she hurriedly made a pot of water. The cool water flowed along the long stems and leaves to the pot. The dry soil made a slight "cuckoo" sound, as if it began to revel in a carnival: "It's so great! It's really quenching thirst." I looked at the leaves of the green ivy, why did I still lower my head? I ran to ask my mother, and she said, "Little fool, how fast is it. You go to the room to read a book for an hour, and then come and see what changes have happened to the green ivy."
I obediently hid in the study room to read a book. An hour passed quickly. I couldn't wait to run towards the Green Ivy.
wow! This time, it was full of energy. The originally curly leaves opened, and the whole body was filled with vitality of life. The color is greener, the stems are fuller, and the seedlings that have just grown shortly below are also fresher. A breeze blew, as if the whole balcony was cool green. I looked at it foolishly, as if I had become a green ivy, dancing in the wind with them, singing a hymn to regain my life.
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