Introduction: My dad, my mother, my hometown, this is a must-write topic for every elementary school student’s composition. How to write an essay about your hometown? It is enough to grasp two points, one is characteristics, and the other is emotions. Today, let’s talk about the writing of the essays in my hometown based on the excellent works of Cao Kaiwen.
Sample essay: , Taichung Park
Author: Third Grade Affiliated Primary School of Hunan Changshi Cao Kaiwen
My hometown is in Taichung, separated from the mainland by a strait. Looking down from the plane, Taiwan Island is like a big sweet potato, surrounded by the sea on all sides is very spectacular. Because there is a tall central mountain range of in front of Taichung, blocking the typhoons blowing from the sea, my hometown is like spring all year round and is the most suitable city for living in Taiwan.
My home is opposite Taichung Park. Taichung Park has been built for more than 100 years. It is one of the oldest parks in Taiwan and a landmark of Taichung City. Because I am very close to the park, I often take a walk in the park. When you walk into the park, you will see big banyan trees, lush and lush. Under the trees, you will often see lively and clever little squirrels running around. People will rest under the trees when they are tired of walking. This is what people often say, "Previous people plant trees, and later generations enjoy the coolness. ".
Taichung Park Lake Pavilion
Walking forward, you will see a clear artificial lake, surrounded by colorful roses. There are many rides and sports venues in the park, and you can also row on the lake. There is a beautiful pavilion in the middle of the lake, where many children are often feeding fish.
The Lantern Festival Lantern Festival in Taichung Park is well-known far and wide. I still remember that one year on the Lantern Festival, the park was brightly lit, and I pulled my dad to run into the park regardless of the slightest moment. In the park, everyone is watching fireworks guessing riddles, which is very lively. We walk through the ocean of people and the ocean of lights, and unknowingly forget time. When I looked up, I suddenly saw a round moon hanging quietly in the air.
This year's Lantern Festival, I saw the moon on the balcony of my home in Changsha. I remember my hometown, and my hometown Taichung Park, where my family and friends are.
Moonlight
Teacher Zhou Dongfei commented:
If we sort the composition topics of primary school students in order, "My hometown" will definitely rank among the top. The secret to writing about hometown is one of characteristics and the other is emotions.
Let’s take a look first, how to write down the characteristics of your hometown? Since it is written about "my hometown", the articles written should be "unique", and not everyone's hometown should be similar. The children write about their hometown as one, but the key reason is that they fail to grasp the characteristics of their hometown. When you mention your hometown to others, you will definitely say with a gaze, "You must have never seen anything there." Why can't you write that vividness when writing an essay? The solution to the problem is very simple, choose what others don’t have. Just like the little author of this article, he writes about the century-old Taichung Park, the little squirrel under the banyan tree, and the Lantern Festival Lantern Festival.
All articles need to express something. Writing articles about your hometown is the most suitable for expressing your love for your hometown. How to express this feeling that should be sincere? It cannot be solved by saying "I really love my hometown". Lyricism and scenery description cannot be done in two ways. We must cleverly connect the emotions and scenery through some details. Just like this article, the little author wrote about the moon on the night of the lantern festival, and at the end, the moon in Taichung and the moon in Changsha, which is originally a round. Seeing the moon is homesick, it is in harmony with the feelings and reason, and is truly moving. It is quite wonderful that Li Bai "look up at the bright moon, and bows down to think of his hometown".
writes out the characteristics and emotions, and there is no reason why "my hometown" is not a good work.
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