Source: [China Education Daily]
The college entrance examination essay topics every year will attract high attention from the society. College entrance examination essays are different from daily writing. What should we pay attention to in examining topics, making ideas, conceptions, writing, etc.? What kind of review and preparation strategies should be adopted during the sprint stage? Famous teachers have given advice!
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Material composition concept should avoid three taboos
Yan Yongfeng
Select the correct angle and accurately establish the idea are the key to writing a good material composition. There are three taboos in terms of conceptual conception for material composition, and we should try our best to avoid:
Taboo 1: Ignore the whole and take it out of context
means that we do not grasp the meaning and relevant requirements of the materials given by the composition test questions from the whole, but only rely on the words and phrases in it. Such a mindset is often biased. Please see the following composition questions -
Read the following text and write an essay according to the requirements.
A writer said that people should read three big books: one is a "book with words", the other is a "book without words", and the other is a "book with soul". What do you think about this? Write an article and comment on the writer's views.
[Note] ① The title is self-written. ②No less than 800 words. ③ Plagiarism or copying is not allowed.
This was once the Zhejiang essay question for the college entrance examination. When establishing the idea, you need to accurately grasp the meaning of the materials given and the relevant requirements. The two are an organic whole and cannot be neglected. Some candidates ignore the general requirement of "evaluating the writer's views" in the test questions, and only rely on the literal understanding of words such as "books with words", "books without words", and "books with spirits". Therefore, they determined that although "as students, we must first read books with words well", "social practice is a more beneficial and valuable book without words", "books with spirits should be read frequently" are the meanings of the topic, but they are also indirect and have a rough idea. Obviously, this idea does not fit the meaning of the question.
Taboo 2: Associate randomly, over-interpretation
means that you do not have the idea from the central perspective or important angle, but Associate is too casual and unfollowed, and over-interpretation of the materials given in the composition questions. Such a mindset is often a loss of lenientness. Please see the following composition questions -
Read the following materials and write according to the requirements.
① days of hard work , a gentleman strives for self-improvement. ("Book of Changes")
② Dew is white from tonight, and the moon is bright in my hometown. ( Du Fu )
③ Why should light green and dark red be the best among flowers? ( Li Qingzhao )
④ Received from the courtyard and saw a family, and received from the world and shines in all directions. ( Wei Yuan )
⑤ You must dare to face it, so that you can dare to think, speak, do, and take responsibility. (Lu Xun)
⑥ Count the romantic figures, and look at the present day. (Mao Zedong)
Chinese culture is profound and profound, and countless famous quotes have cultivated future generations. After reading the above six sentences, what kind of feelings and thoughts do you have? Please use two or three sentences as the basis to determine the idea, quote it reasonably, and write an article. It is required to choose your own angle, clarify the style of the text, and write your own title; do not copy it, and do not copy it; no less than 800 words.
This was once the composition question for the new National College Entrance Examination II. Some candidates took it for granted that the listed famous sentences were just "examples", so they were wild and randomly associated with other famous sentences they were familiar with and their functions. Therefore, they determined the intentions of "those who are good and respect others will always respect them", "A true gentleman who strives for self-improvement will forget his righteousness when he sees profit", "Decorate this mountain, and look better today". Obviously, this intention is not in line with the requirements of "determining the intention based on two or three sentences" in the test question.
Taboo 3: Echo laziness, have no opinion,
means not putting forward your own opinions, but copying other people's opinions, or following others' opinions, or clichés. Such a mind is often lost on the old side. Please see the following composition questions -
Read the following materials and write according to the requirements.
This year marks the 640th anniversary of the resumption of the college entrance examination in my country's .Over the past 40 years, the college entrance examination has selected materials for the country, promoted educational reform and social progress, and achieved remarkable achievements. Over the past 40 years, the college entrance examination has inspired dreams, embodied the collective memory and personal emotions of generations of young people, and contained the tears, sweat and laughter of countless families. Thinking back then, the 1977 college entrance examination marked the turning point of an era; today, you are fighting hard in the 2017 college entrance examination venue with tens of millions of candidates across the country...
Please write an article with the subtitle "I look at the college entrance examination" or "My college entrance examination" as the subtitle. It is required to choose a good angle and determine the idea; clarify the style and write your own title; do not copy or copy; no less than 800 words.
This was once the National New Curriculum Standard III composition test question. Although the materials provided by the test questions have many angles, there are still some candidates who are either greedy for ease of trouble, or just want to be stable, or simply have no opinion. So they determined that "the selection of materials for the country is of great significance", "the college entrance examination inspired my dreams", "the ups and downs of the college entrance examination", etc., obviously, these ideas come from the materials given by the test questions. Although they are very correct, there is no freshness at all.
(The author's unit is the Education Bureau of Fuyu County, Heilongjiang Province)
How to achieve profound reasoning in the college entrance examination essays
Li Junjie
Looking at the college entrance examination essays in recent years, first, argumentative essays have become the mainstream of college entrance examination essays; second, teachers often prefer to use "deep" to measure the value of candidates' compositions. Therefore, writing a more profound essay on the exam room is one of the main ways to get high scores or even full scores.
The "College Entrance Examination Examination Outline" has three requirements for whether the essays of candidates have a profound meaning: (1) Deeply penetrate the essence through phenomena; (2) Reveal the internal causal relationship between things; (3) The viewpoint is inspiring. In addition, in order to be profound, you must also have profound theories to let readers recognize their views, understand them with reason, and accept them with reason .
Marx once pointed out in the "Introduction" that "Once the theory is mastered by the masses, it will become material power. As long as the theory is convinced, it can grasp the masses; and as long as the theory is thorough, it can convince people. The so-called thoroughness means grasping the root of things." This means that as long as the theory is thorough and profound, it can convince people and conquer people. Of course, this is true for the writing of argumentative essays, and the same is true for the college entrance examination essays. To make the argument go deeper, you need to use profound theories. In other words, you need to use systematic to rationally understand for reasoning.
So, how can we achieve profound reasoning in the argumentative essays for college entrance examination?
Strategy 1: Through the surface of phenomena, explore the essential laws
To make your article full of philosophy and profound theories, you need to learn to observe and think in daily life, build a profound foundation through lasting accumulation, seek to be profound and extensive, and gain a broad view. In writing an exam room essay, do not limit yourself to the object of discussion itself, but should carefully observe, in-depth exploration, dig out the roots from the inside, reveal the essence, and thus put forward insights that are higher than mediocrity, different from ordinary, and deeper than general, and look into the essence and laws behind the material, draw theoretical conclusions, and present them with internal logical relationships, so that the article can be more profound. For example, the excerpt from the 2021 National New College Entrance Examination Paper I's full score essay "Strength and weakness are not destined, life is decided by me":
"The strong may not be strong, and the weak may not be weak" is not only applicable to individuals, but also to states and political parties. The late Qing government adhered to the barriers of agricultural economics and "closed the country" with the arrogant attitude of "the heavenly state", isolated the world, and finally shattered the fantasy; while the New China was poor and unlucky, forging ahead, constantly strengthening its strength, and finally becoming the world's second largest economy; at the beginning of the founding of the Communist Party of China, there were only a dozen people, and after the "April 12" and "July 15" coup, the storm was in turmoil, but it always maintained its original aspiration and worked hard to eventually become the world's largest party. Since then, it has continued to strengthen party building, maintain the party's advanced nature and purity, and lead the people to continuously create miracles.In the text
, the author's view is that "'The strong may not be strong, the weak may not be weak'" is not only applicable to individuals, but also to the state and political parties." In the process of reasoning around this view, the author pays great attention to the essence behind it from specific examples (phenomenons) - "The closed-doors of the Qing government and the growth and growth of the Communist Party of China", "The strong may not be strong, the weak may not be weak", thus making the argument have profound theory and enhancing persuasion.
Another example, the first and last paragraphs of the 2021 National New College Entrance Examination Paper II "Fit for You, Go All in":
How can
be able to move towards a successful life? Is it something that others don't do? Or do what you like? Or do what you don't like? This is a question. Three Successful people have three different choices. If you think about it carefully, it is not difficult to find that these successful life paths must be the choice that fits their own actual things.
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The successful life path is not the path of other people's successful life. At most, you can only get some inspiration from it. The key is to choose a path that suits you. Then fall in love with it and do your best to do it well.
The first paragraph of
raised a question based on the material "How can you move towards a successful life?" Then analyze the material on this and explore its essence from a deeper perspective. "These successful life paths must be the choice that fits their own actual things". This makes the point put forward in the end of the article "The successful life path is not the successful life path of others. At most, you can only get some inspiration from it. The key is to choose a path that suits you. Then fall in love with it and do your best to do it well. "It's natural, more profound, and profound theories, which enhances persuasion.
Strategy 2: Set theoretical premises and enhance the rationality
In the writing of argumentative essays in college entrance examination, it is often necessary to discuss things on the matter. In the process of discussing things on the matter, many students only stay in the analysis and interpretation of the matter itself, and lack theoretical support in the argument, naturally lack depth and sufficient persuasion. If you can give a theory to reason in the process of discussing things on the matter, you can give a theory to reason in the process of discussing things on the matter. The main premise of the reasoning will make reasoning "high-end" and profound, thus conquering readers. For example, the excerpt from the full-score essay "Breaking Out of the Inertia of Thinking":
has preconceived ideas, which reflects the inertia of thinking. This kind of thinking is sometimes wrong. Therefore, when facing specific problems, you need to break out of thinking inertia and reveal the essential characteristics of the problem from other angles, such as using reverse thinking, to reveal the essential characteristics of the problem. During the
WWII , the British and American military investigated the distribution of bullet marks on surviving aircraft in order to strengthen the protection of the fighter. There seems to be no problem, Where there are many bullet marks, it means that they are easily hit and should be reinforced. However, statistician Ward suggested that more attention should be paid to parts with fewer bullet marks. As it turns out, he is correct.
at first sounds unreasonable, but after careful thinking, you can understand: where there are many bullet marks, many aircraft must be severely damaged in these parts, but some crashes and some survive; the surviving aircraft is supported by parts with fewer bullet marks, and the crashed aircraft must be damaged by parts with fewer bullet marks. Ward broke out of the fixed mindset and solved the problem with reverse thinking.
Author When analyzing materials on the matter, we do not directly introduce the materials to analyze them, but first give a major premise with profound theory. This major premise has become the basis for the author to analyze and argue materials, giving the subsequent analysis a reliable theoretical basis. Conclusion "Ward broke out of the fixed thinking pattern and solved the problem with reverse thinking" was natural, thus making the article convinced with reason.
Another example, the excerpt from the 2021 National College Entrance Examination B full-score essay "Cultivate self-thinking, and aspire to become a talent":
The ancients said, "If jade is not carved, it will not become a weapon." "How can a person bear this? Yang Xiong uses archery as a metaphor to reveal the true meaning of chasing dreams. We are just like unconventional jade. Only by ambition to become a weapon, cultivate oneself and think and beautify oneself and beautify oneself and beautify oneself and beautify oneself and beautify oneself and beautify oneself and beautify oneself and beautify oneself and beautify oneself. This passage of text is to express the viewpoint and attitude towards aspiring to become a talent. In this sense, the first two sentences "The ancients said, 'If jade is not carved, it will not become a weapon. ’How can a person behave if Yu Shang is like this? ”It seems dispensable, but it is actually indispensable.Because this sentence gives a profound theoretical premise for aspiring to become a talent, so that analysis and argumentation are not only in the material itself, but also in a profound theoretical basis, which enhances the persuasiveness of the article.
Strategy 3: Quoting famous quotes to help the theory is profound
As the saying goes, facts are better than words. Therefore, when writing argumentative essays, many people pay great attention to factual arguments , and use a large number of detailed examples to prove their views. This is understandable. However, this alone will lack the height and depth of the theory, and the article still needs some profound theories to support it.
In addition to rigorous professional and systematic language expression, the theory still exists in famous quotes that people like. Therefore, appropriately quoting some famous quotes containing profound theories in the composition will make the language of the article shine brightly and make the article's reasoning more profound and persuasive.
For example, the 2021 National New College Entrance Examination Full Score Composition "The Strong People Don't Like But Will Always Be Strong, The Weak People Don't Sadly Will Be Strong", quotes these famous quotes, which contain profound theories and are also the theoretical support for the argumentation of the paragraph and are the major prerequisite for argumentation. Without these famous quotes, the language of the article will suddenly lose its color, and more importantly, the article will appear superficial and pale. With these famous quotes, the persuasiveness of the article is enhanced, especially because we feel the inherent relationship between theories and materials contained in famous quotes, which allows the article to achieve the effect of using profound theories to understand people.
Another example, the 2021 National New College Entrance Examination Paper II full score essay "Using the Way of Being a Human, Adhering to the Imperial Task of the Country" quote:
The last thing to be a human should be "stagnant, detour, and slowly stand out." As life is about to enter the final stage of success, we should maintain a stable mentality of not being arrogant or impatient, and head towards the end with patience and tenacity of "not returning until you destroy Loulan". We have kept the loneliness of "the desert is lonely smoke straight, the long river is round", and we have never relaxed at the last moment, and have done every step carefully, and finally won the aerospace R&D team that "graspes the moon in the nine heavens and catches turtles in the five oceans". With their persistence and patience, we have laid the solidest bricks for them to enter the door of success. The text above
is purely analytical argumentation, focusing on analysis and reasoning, but it does not feel empty and superficial when read. The reason is that before reasoning, we quoted famous ancient poems sung by ancient and modern times, giving reasoning a pair of beautiful wings, giving reasoning a theoretical height and depth.
Another example is the excerpt of the 2021 National New College Entrance Examination Paper II College Entrance Examination Composition "Cultivate and think with thoughts, and work hard to become a weapon":
Throughout history, people with kindness and ambitions, and those who are benevolent and aspiring to achieve great achievements as early as possible. Have you ever remembered it? "It is also what I am good about, even if I die nine times, I will never regret it." Qu Yuan slowly walked by the lake, chanting loudly, and determined to be the country. Finally, I will sink into my heart and never regret it when I die nine times. Have you ever remembered it? "I don't care about the meaning of the cold star. I recommend Xuanyuan with my blood." Mr. Lu Xun used his pen as a blade to sweep across thousands of troops, determined to serve the people, awaken the public, and have no shame in his heart. "Clear love is only for China!" Isn't it admirable for Chen Xiangrong to guard the frontier and cast iron-blooded military spirit with his youthful body? The text
quotes the famous quotes of Qu Yuan, Lu Xun and Chen Xiangrong, and strongly demonstrates the view that "a kind-hearted person and ambition are determined to achieve great achievements as early as possible and be famous for the eternal". This gives the article a theoretical height and depth, and also stipulates the direction of subsequent argumentation and analysis.
In general, profound theory helps to make the article have higher intentions, deeper and more powerful arguments, more logical expressions, and more accurate directions of the writing. But these skills are based on well-trained daily. Therefore, we need to read more theoretical articles to improve our theoretical cultivation; observe more and think more, and improve our ability to explore the essence of things; accumulate more famous quotes, enrich our theoretical reserves, and use them consciously in writing practice. Only in this way can you write like a god in the exam room and truly understand people with profound theories.
(The author is a senior Chinese teacher at Zhaoqing School affiliated to South China Normal University)
material composition must have accuracy depth and height
- Taking the 2021 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination Composition Title as an example
Bao Zhousheng
Excellent material composition title must pay attention to examining the humanistic literacy of candidates, pay attention to logic, and highlight thinking. If you want to get a relatively satisfactory score in a material composition, you should work hard on the accuracy of the question, depth of thinking, and height of thought.
Specifically, I think these three steps should be taken:
First, sort out the logical relationship and improve the accuracy of reviewing questions.
Relationship refers to a certain connection between several things, and it is one of the important concepts of logic. We must first sort out the logical relationship between sentences (or keywords) in the material to improve the accuracy of the question review.
Taking the 2021 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination Question as an example, we can "choose one of three" to expand our discussion, or we can combine the three to write down their logical relationship and meaning. "Gain and Loss" is a relationship between and unifying , while the relationship between "end point", "starting point" and "process" is not simple. It has both connections and differences. They are not absolutely opposite, but can be integrated with each other. Because of the composition topic of this material, the core content is one sentence - "Some people regard gains and losses as the end point, some people regard gains and losses as the starting point, and some people regard gains and losses as the process". This is a parallel sentence, "Some people... some people... some people...", which forms a parallel relationship and represents three "gains and losses" concepts: "gains and losses and end point", "gains and losses and starting point", "gains and losses and processes", but carefully examining the expression order between "end point", "starting point" and "process" is actually cognitively progressive, so such a sentence arrangement is quite meaningful. Therefore, if we only stay at the periphery of "gain and loss", it is inevitable that there will be omissions when reviewing the questions; only by sorting out the "gain and loss" and "starting point", "end point", "process" and the logical relationship between them can we grasp the accuracy of the idea when writing without deviating from the questions.
Secondly, promote layered discussions and increase the depth of thinking.
The depth of thinking refers to the process and degree of human consciousness from sensibility to rationality, from surface to essence. Obviously, the college entrance examination composition questions should test the depth of the candidates' thinking, or in other words, the idea of the examination composition should be profound. We can adopt the method of peeling bamboo shoots, advance layer by layer, clarify the relationship between keywords, and dive deeper into the thinking. So, how can we advance layer by layer to increase the depth of thinking of the article?
or take the 2021 Zhejiang title as an example. I think we can think about the basic idea and the best idea from multiple perspectives. It can be from the perspective of "gain", "loss", or from the opposite aspect of "gain" and "loss", or from the perspective of the unity of "gain and loss". To view "gain and loss" as a whole, that is, it is both the "starting point", the "end point" and the "process". Such a concept is scientific, comprehensive, speculative, and also helps us to discuss it layer by layer. We can explain the connotation of "end point", "starting point" and "process" from "what is "a" (is "awarding point", "starting point" or "process") to "why" (more thinking about how "awarding point and loss" are "end point", "starting point" and "process"), and explain clearly where the internal connection between these three is. Such a discussion is relatively comprehensive, objective, and dialectical, and will not produce one-sided and biased views. This will enhance the depth of thinking, develop logical thinking, and improve the quality of thinking. Therefore, when writing, try to explore the logical meaning between words or sentences, connect them with daily life and life experiences, and elevate them to a certain rational level; it can also be pushed by individuals and groups, or even higher levels, so as to advance layer by layer and step by step, so that the depth of thinking of the article can be increased.
Finally, based on the "big self" level, improve your ideological height.
The height of thought refers to the unity of personal consciousness with the collective, the country, and human society. Only by unifying the individual consciousness with the consciousness of the collective, the country, and the human society can we achieve the improvement of consciousness.
people are different, and they will have different answers to "gains and losses", which also shows different life perceptions and spiritual realms. Some people may think more briefly and only see their own world in the "ego"; some people may think a little further and see other people's life experiences and lessons; some people may stand higher, see farther and more high-level, and keep the "big self" in their hearts. The Ministry of Education Examination Center expert said in his evaluation of Zhejiang composition that "gain and loss: end point, starting point, process" provides a multi-dimensional perspective of viewing "gain and loss", guiding candidates to establish views and think through multiple relationships, form a correct outlook on life, and empower wonderful life.
Obviously, the "person" in the question can be an ordinary "you", "me", "he"; it can be a "person" in the past, or the "person" today; it can be a "ego", or even a "big self". Therefore, when we choose writing materials, we can write about the gains and losses of individuals on the road of growth, how our minds grow up, and how our understanding of life matures; we can write about how models of the new era such as Yuan Longping and Fan Jinshi , and how to look down on personal gains and losses, combine personal dreams with the future of the motherland, and write about their wonderful annotations with practical actions as the "starting point", "end point" and "process"; we can also combine party history education to talk about the revolutionary martyrs who would rather have "loss" for the founding of New China and the "gain" of the country, and for the revitalization of the nation, they would rather be the "end point" and "starting point" and dedicate themselves to the hard "process"... If the article is elevated to the national and national level, and have a "big self", there will be a "height" and a broad realm.
Cultivating morality and cultivating people, connecting with life and focusing on growth have always been the general direction of college entrance examination essays. The personal choice of candidates' personal values should be in line with the interests of the nation and the country, thereby reflecting the social moral standards and sense of responsibility of citizens. This is also the mission and responsibility of young students in the new era.
In short, as long as candidates can do their best in terms of question review accuracy, depth of thinking, and height of thinking, they can generally write satisfactory exam essays.
(The author's unit is Jiaxing High School in Jiaxing, Zhejiang)
College Entrance Examination Essay Enters the "Era of Intellect"
Wu Zaizhu
2021 College Entrance Examination Essay Questions Once the 2021 college entrance examination essay question was announced, netizens exclaimed: Sa Beining , bet right, "Awakening Era" did take the exam.
After reading four sets of national paper composition questions, the author thought of another sentence: I will have to pay back the reading debt I owe sooner or later.
Take the National A Book as an example. The composition materials include the following sentences: "The festivals we have are like 'May 4th', 'July 1st', 'August 1st', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Hong Kong', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh', 'Eleventh How many people have read "Lotus Pond" and "Red Rock"? What touching deeds or related quotes do Li Dazhao, Xia Minghan, Fang Zhimin, Yang Jingyu and others have? How many people can know this? You might as well ask your children or your students about these questions.
This composition requires combining materials and writing an article with the theme of "Can behave and behave". "Can be able to do and have action" has a philosophical thinking: Everyone can do it, how can they be able to do it? How can we achieve great things?
National Certificate B College Entrance Examination Essay talks about pursuing ideals, quoting a passage from Yang Xiong of the Han Dynasty: "Cultivating oneself is a bow, thinking is a arrow, establishing one's righteousness, establishing one's righteousness, and then starting one's righteousness, and then starting one's trueness will surely hit the mark." If you want to write more solidly, you must accumulate some typical examples of ancient and modern Chinese and foreign celebrities on pursuing ideals, and explain it from the perspectives of "cultivating oneself", "correction", "establishing one's righteousness", and "founding the foundation".
The materials provided in the National Entrance Examination I of the New College Entrance Examination are a passage in the article "Study on Sports" published by Mao Zedong in 1917: "Those who are born strong do not have to be happy, and those who are born weak do not have to be sad. Is it unclear if I was born weak, or if the heaven tempted me so strong that I am strong." This is actually a test of the candidates' philosophical ability about "weak" and "strong". It would be difficult to write this article without solid accumulation.
New College Entrance Examination National Paper II provides a set of comic materials about the calligraphy of the character "man". The strokes are: "Start the strokes against the tip, hide without revealing them"; the strokes are: "Start the strokes in the center, be unbiased"; the strokes are: "Stop and detour, slowly come out"; the entire character "man" needs to be "traceed red". It can be understood that hiding the edge teaches us wisdom, ignoring the edge teaches us to sharpen the edge, center teaches us to be upright, lifting the edge teaches us to be vivid, replying the edge teaches us to be grateful, and tracing the red to teach us to be morally cultivated.
To sum up, the author believes that college entrance examination essays have entered the "era era", that is, students can only continuously improve their literary, humanistic and philosophical background, and “create new things” through the "upholding the truth".
If you want to enrich your background, you need to read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles. It is impossible to write a good college entrance examination essay by cramming temporarily, whining without any illness, and the so-called ethereality.
We often say that the reading debt owed will have to be paid sooner or later. In fact, for students, once they owe reading debts in elementary and junior high schools, they cannot repay them when they reach high school and even college.
Missed the reading season and missed the golden period.
(The author is a senior Chinese teacher of Kuzhu Township Middle School in Huangmei County, Hubei Province, and a special teacher of )
Initial composition:
Be a young man, be a young man, be a young man,
Gong Zhimin
Teachers and classmates:
Hello everyone!
Hope and dreams, struggle and anxiety, goals and confusion together constitute the ideological and personal tension of young people. As the dawn begins, the achievements are brilliant; when the cold wind suddenly rises, the setbacks are confused and anxious, and even lying flat, sighing and walking hard. The root cause of young people's personality entanglement is that they have less reflection and less precipitation, and their shallow understanding of their own life and the trajectory of their destiny. If youth has no contradictions and great personal entanglement, then youth tension will inevitably not be great enough. Youth is in a dilemma.
Accepting the present and embracing the present, whether it is achievements or difficulties, is the first attitude that young people should have.
Only when the water enters the sea can it never dry up. We regard you as such young people, and as youth, you should be like this: "All days, all days, let me weave you, and weave you with the golden thread of youth and the happiness of necklaces of ." The big self and the small self, enlarge yourself and narrow yourself, and strive to lie down. The problem seems so difficult, but the choice is actually just a thought. Zhong Nanshan is getting stronger and stronger, and he is still running on the front line of the fight against the epidemic in his 80s; the elites who serve the country with science and technology have worked hard for generations, hanging onto the Beidou, climbing to Mars, and unremitting their ambitions. A good young man is not limited by his personal gain or is not trapped in temporary setbacks. The sky is high and the earth is far away. No matter what situation a truly strong person is facing, he must choose to go on, look at the scenery ahead, and embellish the mountains and rivers ahead.
Good young people, have ideals, and enterprising youth will not turn yellow.
integrate youth into society, raise your attention to "seeing the truth", and turn your vision to the great cause of national rejuvenation, and incorporate the exquisite self into the vast wilderness. The fallacy of arrogance will be destroyed; regard difficulties as a natural necessity in life, enjoy overcoming difficulties, and use rugged and concave lines as beauty, and lying flat and slack will be destroyed. Only by eliminating this dilemma can we not be arrogant or impatient, and then we will be determined to move far. Zhu Guangqian teaches young people earnestly with the "seeing the truth", hoping that young people will dare to stand up and magnify themselves when the country needs it and in the face of human dignity; and dare to narrow themselves in front of the group. Every time you relax and relax, the true self of a young man will be revealed, and his inner strength will be achieved.
Scholars must not be broad-minded and have a long way to go. Life is long, and you must follow the doctrine of the mean. The bright ones are easy to be dirty, and the hard ones are easy to be broken. Young people lack passion, what is lacking is perseverance and perseverance; there are no shortage of temporary inspiration discoveries and setbacks stories, what is lacking is the wisdom to pursue along inspiration discoveries and see the sun, and what is lacking is the persistence that becomes more and more courageous as you setbacks.In the long run, sticking to the middle, and using the middle is the kingly way of life.
hours, a person who has not yet achieved great success in history has many people, so what is worthy of praise? The bravest Lu Bu , Xiang Yu , the prodigy Fang Zhongyong, and Wang Bo , all failed to laugh at the end of their respective careers. And the people who have suffered humiliation and finally succeeded are even more respectful. Flowers fall everywhere with the flowing water, and the unique pine and cypress stand on the cold wind. Being a young man should be like this: be as old as the country, be happy with your companions, support your elders, and be connected with your young. If you are such a young man, the song of youth will never end.
Any mentality of complacent for one's own gain and one's gain is an obstacle to the youth's moral progress; any behavior of abandoning one's life or complaining about others is a manifestation of the vulnerability and cowardice of young people. A gentleman will be able to practice it by himself until the flowers bloom and see the Buddha.
The youth of blindly arrogant and arrogant often subconsciously equate the ego with the big self and even above the big self. When enlarged, the red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple and purple look beautiful; if it is pierced, the bubble is empty and there is nothing. Good young people don’t need such dreams, real young people want real struggle and happiness.
This is a great era, an era that requires good and real youth. Only by consciously accepting oneself in the sea can youth be healthy and broad. Go to the sea to make a drop of water or a fish. Even if you are a pearl, it is best to hide in the fish eyes in the sea, follow the fish to travel around the world and see the vicissitudes of the world. Let self-esteem and self-humility be one, today's green collar is the heart of China tomorrow.
(The author is a Chinese teacher, a special teacher, and a famous teacher of the "Ten Thousand Talents Plan" teaching teacher)
Attachment: Shenzhen Senior 32 Model Composition Questions in April 2022
Read the following materials and write according to the requirements. (60 points)
At the class meeting of the theme "What kind of youth do we want to be today", the question raised by the teacher made you think: Why do many young people become arrogant when they get a little grade, and when they encounter some difficulties, they are used to lying flattery? How can we get rid of entanglement and move forward?
During that time, you happened to be reading "Twelve Letters to Youth" written by Mr. Zhu Guangqian. You were impressed by one of the words: "In the far-sighted vision of those who see the Tao, 'I' can be reduced to infinite small or infinite large. When 'I' is placed in infinite large, they see the dignity of human nature; when 'I' is reduced to infinite small, they see the realization of human nature in themselves is still very limited... Aware of the dignity of human nature and self-esteem, and self-esteem and self-worth are united, so they practice the best and strive for self-improvement."
You found the answer from Mr. Zhu Guangqian's earnest teachings and raised your hand to ask for a speech.
requirements: combine the materials, select the right angle, determine the idea, clarify the style, and write the title yourself; do not copy, do not plagiarize; do not disclose personal information; no less than 800 words.
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