[Mind Map Drawing Essay] My Diary (27) Childhood is a charming painting [Mind Map Drawing Essay] Pan Duo's "My Diary - My National Day Holiday Going to Climb the Mountain" (27) Meeting Sun Lu again [Stories of Me and the Little Author] This little author is Pan Duo from the third

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Childhood, is a charming painting

[Mind Map Drawing Essay] Pan Duo "My Diary - My Mountain Climbing during National Day Holiday" (27)

Meet again

Hou Lu

Hou Hou

[Story of Me and the Little Author] This little author is Pan Duo from the third grade of Lei Feng Primary School. She is a sunny, happy and cute girl. She studies hard and works hard and her composition is very creative. I like her very much. Child, I hope to continue my efforts and write more good works. Come on.

Welcome to follow and appreciate the creative essays of children. If you like their works, please like them. Children learn to write and can record what they see, hear and feel truly. This is what we are most pleased with. We look forward to him making greater progress!

The real growth is that you benefit from growth and people can benefit from your growth! Welcome to enjoy the excellent essay display of the young authors in our class! Records are the only existence!

Dear child, when I met you, the wind sang in my ears, the sky was particularly clear, and every inch of time was filled with the fragrance of ink. All you meet are God's will, and all you have are luck. Thank you for your meeting today, let us cherish it all. I hope the children will continue to work hard, make greater progress in my composition class, and become my good disciples!

Four points to pay attention to when writing a diary:

(1) Diary is a real record of daily life, so the content must be specific.

(2) Diary is generally written in the first person. You have to write your own affairs. Even if you write about other people’s affairs, you will see or hear about them and write them in your own tone.

(3) The diary should have key points and the content should be true.

(4) Note the format: Write the date (year, month, day, week) and weather in sequence on the first line, and write the text in two blanks in the second line.

The content of the diary comes from life. As long as we pay attention to it everywhere and think hard, vivid writing materials will appear continuously.

When writing a diary, whether it is recording people, events, or describing objects, or describing scenery, it must be real or exist in life, and you must also pay attention to the smooth content you write.

Note that you can choose the most worth recording point or point of the day to write it. Do not explain it one by one in detail and write it into a record.

First write a certain year, month, day, day of the week, and weather conditions in the middle of the first line; then start writing the main text from the second line, with two spaces in front.

Going a mountain during the National Day holiday

October 2 Sunday sunny

Leifeng Primary School Class 4, Year 3 Panduo

On the eve of National Day, Zhou Wei's mother and my mother decided to go hiking the next day.

Today we gathered at Zhou Wei’s doorstep at 08:30, and then we set out towards Changshoushan . One hour and 30 minutes later, we arrived at the gate of Changshoushan.

When I arrived at the foot of the mountain, I was shocked by the crowd in front of me when I got off the bus. We could only follow the crowd to the mountain. Climbing halfway up the mountain, our father set up a big tent, and a few of us kids rushed into the tent, looking at the beautiful scenery and having afternoon tea. I was in a great mood.

After the afternoon tea, we lay in the tent for a while and set out towards the top of the mountain. Climbing to the statue of the old man Changshou, we saw the longevity hut and the longevity tree, which were hung with wishing signs and longevity signs. Afterwards, we went down the mountain to go back to our surroundings. Someone will ask when he read this, why? Because, we have to hold a barbecue party. At the party, we performed our respective talents for the adults, which caused applause and cheer.

Today we shook hands with Happy and had a very happy life!

I like to find fun with children in the text, share kindness with their pen, and understand the world with emotions. The students’ excellent works are published on my public platform. Welcome to read and follow. May our words heal your heart, and hope that life will be pure and the tenderness you meet when you look up.

Children, pick up the pen and join us to start creating!

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I like to organize the exercises written by students in creative composition classes and make them into exhibitions.

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let children and parents feel their growth and progress, and accumulate materials for future learning.

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Parents have sorted out the photos of the young author and displayed them with the composition to witness the footprints of growth.

As a teacher, you should be good at discovering the highlights of students, using their highlights to motivate them, mobilize their enthusiasm, and cultivate their interest in learning. Writing essays with mind maps is a new course, and students are very interested. Only by making students interested in learning can students learn happily and teachers teach comfortably.Therefore, we must use every opportunity to inspire and cultivate their interest in writing!

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