Foxes with different appearances
Class 45, Grade 6, Jinsha Road Primary School, Liuyang City, Hunan Province Liu Yichen
In the forest kingdom, there is a fox. He always has one thing in front of him and another behind him.
The fox was walking by the river in the forest kingdom. Suddenly, he saw a crow. The crow was standing on the branch singing a beautiful song: "Ah———————”
The fox said to the crow: "Dear Mr. Crow, the song you sang is so beautiful! Go to the big stage of the forest to sing!"
"Okay, okay!" After that, the crow flapped its wings and flew away, and he was secretly happy when he left, "Wow! Finally someone recognized my singing."
The crow flew away, and the fox said to the squirrel beside him, "The black crow has finally left, the noise he made is so ugly."
walked forward again, and the fox saw the duck that had just finished swimming and was walking towards the fox. "Miss Duck, you are so cute when you walk!" the fox exclaimed. The duck was so excited, "Ga! Ga! Really?" After saying that, he left with a sway. The fox said to the fish beside him again, "That ugly duck, its butt is so ugly!"
The fox walked into the forest and saw a peacock showing everyone its feathers. The fox walked over and said to the peacock, "Miss Peacock, your feathers are so beautiful, as if there are many beautiful gems inlaid on it." The peacock said thank you, and then walked home.
The fox said to the wolf brothers again: "What's the use of being good-looking? It's flashy and just a show!"
After a long time, everyone knows that the fox is a person with different opinions and is unwilling to be friends with him.
Comments:
This story is short and concise, in line with the characteristics of fables - small stories and big principles. The master fox is designed to be lifelike, especially the language description design, which describes the language comparison between the fox before and after, and describes its differences in appearance. The article uses repeated techniques to create. The three plots have their own characteristics and are wonderful, making the article interesting to read. The ending of the fox is written, the theme is pointed out, and the readers are attracted to think.
(Instructor: Bao Yahong)
