Primary school students give people the impression of being innocent. They speak without restraint and often make some jokes. When they write essays, they often make some jokes that make the teacher dumbfounded.
"My mother", "my father" and "my aunt" are the most common essay topics in primary school. Many children start from their appearance when writing this kind of essay. This child's essay "my aunt" also starts from the appearance of his aunt, but this child knows a lot. He wrote in the essay that his aunt is very beautiful, but her nose is fake and has a prosthesis inside. My child, is it really okay for you to expose your aunt like this?
The title of the essay written by this classmate is comfort. The content is that the father compared the mother to a fish, saying that the fish does not need to be fed after being caught. As a result, the mother punished him by kneeling on the durian. When he saw his father in pain, the caring little cotton-padded jacket ran to his father
and said: You are unlucky. You caught a crocodile. Are you really comforting your father instead of trying to catch a crocodile?
Mother is always the most beautiful in the eyes of children. In the heart of this classmate, his mother is also the most beautiful, just like a flower. He even wrote a poem to praise her mother's beauty, "Ah, my mother is as beautiful as a flower, oh, my father is as ugly as mud." I have to say that these two poems correspond quite well, but if you say this, will your father really not get beaten when he comes home? I don't know whether this classmate's mother should cry or laugh after reading this poem.
Everyone must be familiar with the composition topic "Help Mom Do One Thing". Many children will write about washing their mother's feet, helping their mother cook, etc. The composition written by this student is about helping her mother eat the fruit. I would like to ask, does my mother really need your help in this matter?
In primary school, everyone wrote about the topic of "trust", but most people wrote about the trust between friends and the trust between strangers. This classmate was very different. He wrote about the trust between the thief and the thief. Because their family believed in the thief, the thief did not steal their things. After reading the essay, the teacher said: This is the trust between people.
In fact, there are some very touching compositions among primary school students. The composition written by this classmate is about a liar. On his birthday, a liar called this classmate and said that he could give him a mobile phone on his birthday as long as he transferred 100 yuan as a handling fee. The classmate transferred 100 yuan to the liar because the liar was the only one who remembered his birthday. Unexpectedly, the liar was so moved by him that he actually gave him a mobile phone.
It’s really hard to believe that such a composition was written by a primary school student. Many netizens shed tears when they saw this composition. A primary school student wrote about the trust between people, but this also reflects the lack of love in children. Parents with children at home should also pay attention and give more care to their children.
Composition accounts for a large part of the score in the Chinese language test. Many parents think that composition cannot separate the scores. In fact, this is not the case. There will be essays with full marks and essays with 30 points in the college entrance examination. The difference is 30 points, and these 30 points are the scores that can be obtained by answering three major math questions, because parents should pay attention and must improve their children's writing skills as soon as possible.
How to write a good composition?
1. You should accumulate more in daily life and read more excellent compositions. In the morning, you can read some excellent compositions with perfect scores and accumulate the good words and sentences in them.
A small suggestion: You can prepare a good-looking little book for your children, so that the children will also accumulate it. If you are motivated, you can supervise how much your children accumulate every week
2. Focus on the beginning and the end. This is the most effective way to improve the score of the essay in the short term. As long as the beginning and end are eye-catching enough, the score will not be low. You can usually accumulate more famous quotes, which will be very useful when writing. Bonus points
3. Write the words neatly. After the answer sheet is uploaded to the computer, the child's test paper will be enlarged. If the words are written neatly and clearly, it is easy to get extra points.
4. The beginning and end should echo each other. Be sure to click on the questions so that the marking teacher can see the main idea you want to express. Can be blurred
5. Accumulate more materials to saturate the entire composition, and have arguments to support it. You can usually read more news, celebrity deeds, etc.
Composition is half of the Chinese test paper. Children must pay attention to it and improve their writing ability and level.