Use a sincere heart to spread the truth of composition.
Hello everyone! This time, I will share with you the second unit assignments of the third grade book one-diary writing. Speaking of diaries, it is a memory that countless people will never forget. Are there still diaries from the reading age in your drawer?
The entry diary of the third grade child is very important and the format cannot be wrong. As for the content, I advocate highlighting "true", "new" and "interesting". In order to make it easier for everyone to read, I broke the class boundaries of the children’s diaries, and divided them into the following categories according to the direction of the topic, and selected the golden sentences in the diaries of 17 children. Welcome to enter the children's diary and enter the innocent childlike heart.
The first category: happy and unhappy in the eyes of children
diary is one of the ways to record mood. We adults usually post on Moments, Weibo , headlines or Douyin, etc. Many of them are also expressions of mood. Then the pupils pour out their true heart in the diary, which is also conducive to the pupils to write the "real me" composition. Let's take a look at the happy or unhappy things about the children.
➽ 1. [Diary Golden Sentence] I am not happy today because our class relay raced last place. What made me even more angry was that when Xiao Liu, Xiao Hu and I were trying their best to run, Xiao Zhu ran like playing.
——A Unforgettable Day by Xiaoxia, the third grade in the fall
[Abao's comment] It turned out that,In the eyes of children with a strong sense of collective honor, it doesn't matter if they sweat, but they are annoyed when they meet a "pig teammate."
➽ 2. [Diary Golden Sentence] ①When the loud whistle blew, when the audience shouted "Come on! Come on!...", the boys in the back of our class seemed to be walking. "Run". When I thought that our class might not have the chance to sprint to the first place, I hurriedly shouted: "What are you doing? We are playing now!" We encouraged and cheered for every team member. Later, the team members cooperated well. very nice! At the last minute, everyone did not relax and ran like desperately. ②When the physical education teacher said that our class score was eighty-eight, surpassing the eighty-one of the opponent's third class, the big boulder in my heart finally landed, and I said happily, jumping and jumping with joy. Cheers and congratulations with the classmates...
——A fall third grade Xiaoni "Unforgettable Game"
[Abao's comment] is different from the previous example in that the "pig teammate" passes through the class and "must win." "The spirit of "baptism" caught up. One of the secrets of specific and detailed content is the description of mental activities (full text in full), including changes in mental activities (the heart is like a rabbit before the game, the eagerness to "hate iron but not steel" during the game, and the inner excitement after the game. Joy.
➽ 3. [Diary Golden Sentence] ①Today it is Mr. Chen who took us to take part in the big break activities, and I can skip 2 very happy. Because when Mr. Guo takes us there, he can only practice line formation and can’t jump long ropes. ②We girls can jump, but what about boys? They can’t even use the most common jumping methods.Ugh! The boys in our class skip rope really badly.
-Autumn third grade Jingjing "Unforgettable Big Break"
[Abao's comment] The young author truly recorded the big break activities of the day, including the review of the teacher's photos Video between classes. In addition to seeing and hearing, there are more places to write about feelings. It turns out that in the eyes of children, skipping rope can satisfy them. Joy, so simple.
➽ 4. [Diary Golden Sentence] It turns out that every time between large classes, everyone not only has to accept the "punishment" of the sun under the sun, but also endure us The test. The teacher said that these are for our health, but why do we have to run exercises every time between major classes, so that we are half tired? This is very unforgettable for me, and it is also a headache that I encounter every day.
——Fall third grade Xiaoshang "Troublesome big break"
[Abao's comment] Big break, according to common sense, is a happy moment for children to relax. However, running against the scorching sun is something that some children are puzzled by. I wrote my true thoughts, expressed clearly, and expressed my incomprehension. How to be more specific? You can use your brains around the word "tired". How did everyone become tired? How did you become tired? In this way, not only will the number of words be 300+, but the impression on readers will be even more profound.
➽ 5. [Diary Golden Sentence] The three ant nests in a row are as neat as three rows of buildings.The little ants are busy going in and out. Suddenly, a big sole of a "sandbag" slowly approached these three "buildings." With a sudden blow, the big sole of the foot turned the ant hole into a flat ground, and the little ants were killed and wounded by the big "palm" of the sky. It's so pitiful! Really angry! Even the ants were not let go, and the cute little ants were "buried" alive. I feel sad and want to use small stones to build a tombstone for the ants.
——A Sad Day by Xiao Guo, the third grade in the fall.
[Abao comment] The little ant on campus may be the little author’s little playmate between classes. However, the little ants encountered "home destruction and death", which made the little author feel pity. Diary, revealing the heart, is precious.
➽ 6. [Diary Golden Sentence] ① "Thursday, September 20th, the weather is very sunny today, but my mood is like "my dark clouds and dense cloth". It was replaced! My lively and lovely tablemate Xie Zhekai was replaced by Zhang Xiaolin who was "quiet" and even somewhat "indifferent". The first day I was at the same table with him, I was very unaccustomed to it, and felt the whole world was sinking. Into the quiet. For this, I was depressed. ②The most uncomfortable thing is that his writing is simply a ghostly symbol, and what is more terrible is that the teacher also assigned me a "honorable and difficult task"-let me teach him to write. What’s even more sad is that when I taught him it was so dry, but he didn’t even listen to a word. I was going crazy.
——Fall third grade Xiao Jiang "My New Deskmate" 》
[Abao's comment] The story of the same table is often written by children. What is commendable is that the children of Chengman vividly present themselves after changing to a new tablemate. In the diary,This is one of the functions of the diary-a harbor for pouring out the soul. "Little boy, a lot of troubles." It turns out that in the eyes of a child, how much he is reluctant to "transfer" from a "like-minded" tablemate. Excerpts ① are even more bright spots. Such as the clever use of words, the reason behind and so on.
The second category: children’s instant diary materials
occasionally "interludes" in the classroom, and at this time, you need to have a keen sense to capture A moment worth recording in this "interlude".
➽ 7. [Diary Golden Sentence] The dark brown and greenish caterpillar is lying leisurely on Zhao Junyi's red scarf. It feels okay at all. Look at the "victim" Zhao Junyi looking at this caterpillar "trespassing" the human world with disgusting eyes, looking at a loss. At this moment, the teacher asked Ye Yunhao, the "insect catcher" in our class, to throw away the caterpillar along with the red scarf.
——Autumn third-grade Xiaoxuan "Caterpillar Incident"
[Abao's comment] Caterpillars who "trespass" in the human world, as well as "an expert in catching insects." A little thing around him is kept in the heart of the child and written in the diary. The thing is interesting and the expression is interesting.
Coincidentally, classmate Yinuo also paid attention to the "caterpillar incident" and also mentioned Ye Yunhao, "the master of insect catching". The title of the diary is "The Terrible Caterpillar."
➽ 8.【Diary Golden Sentence】 ①Suddenly,I found a yellow ant that looked like a captain broke into my "territory". Hearing my screams, my classmate Xiao Jiang came to be interested. I saw him take the pencil and poke at the ant with the tip of the pen, and the ant was stabbed to death. You know, for us, pencils are stationery, but for weak ants, they are deadly weapons! The other one is at the same table (the three of us are sitting in a row, I sit in the middle) Jingjing shot now, don't think she is a "weak woman". She pressed her thumb and the hapless ant was crushed to pieces. ②I also want to thank this ant for allowing me to find the inspiration for writing a diary. warn! warn! Like ants, please don't break into my "territory" anymore. My two tablemates will "kill the killer".
——The "tragedy" that happened in the classroom by Inno in the third grade in the fall
[Abao's comment] This "tragedy" that happened in the classroom happened when we were in class, can you Truly record the whole process. If you can closely follow the "miserable" in the title and write down the tragic situation of the weak ant, it is best to reproduce some sympathy, so that the theme is more prominent, see the modification of ②; I hope the children will gradually learn the methods of comparison, mental activity description, etc. If you see the scream of the queen ant actually stems from inner fear, etc., is it better if you can write about the psychological activities? Of course, this is a relatively high requirement for the third grade. You need to think more and practice often in the future.
➽9 .【Diary Golden Sentence】 I immediately poked my head out and looked at the front row and saw an ant crawling on her composition paper! I almost yelled out too. At this moment, the Ding Xuan "hero" beside her poked at the ant with a pencil. For ants, this "weapon" is terrible.
——Autumn third grade Xiaonuo "The Poor Ant"
[Abao's comment] The young author truly recorded his own observations and thoughts,Wrote the situation at the time. If you focus on the word "poor" and write down your sympathy for the little ant, the diary will be more readable.
➽ 10. [Diary Golden Sentence] ① I started to make a "sud" sound in my mouth, I wanted to shoot the "machine gun" at the student who laughed the most , But Teacher Abao jokingly called me a "bomber", and in the Q&A gap, a line of text appeared on the screen: "A retired bomber in poor quality with extremely unstable performance." This caused a burst of laughter. ②A mischievous bug came to interfere, and I waved unceremoniously and hit it. Teacher A Bao saw this scene again. He didn't criticize me with words, just an extra line of text on the screen: "Bombers hit bugs-overkill." He also said that this is an allegorical saying. Needless to say, there was another hearty laughter in the classroom.
-Fall third grade Kobayashi "Today I Become a "Bomber""
【Abao comment】 is drawn from around, belongs to the "instant and fresh" material, the expression is also real and interesting, and it can be true when creating Experience the joy of creation.
➽ 11.【Diary Golden Sentence】 Last Sunday, the weather was fine. After I finished my homework, I asked Jialin to go to the park by the river to practice "Football Reel". We put up "obstacles" every two meters or so, but Jialin made a "sudgy" sound in his mouth while deliberately kicking the football heavily, and the football rolled into the green belt. Just after I finally got the football out, he "cleared" the "obstacles" again. This naughty Jialin! No wonder that during the break tonight,Teacher Abao typed a line on the screen: "A retired bomber with extremely unstable performance and inferior quality that is in disrepair." Because he also "suddenly" at night.
——Fall third grade Xiao Liao ""Football around the pole" encounters "bomber""
[Abao's comment] can draw on the daily life around him, and write clearly what happened. ]
➽ 12.【Diary Golden Sentence】 ①I was late for class today, but I didn't mean it. Because my gums were swollen last Wednesday, and I didn't take the medicine in time, it became very serious today. My grandfather took me for an infusion, and forgot the class time. ②Sitting in the classroom, I don't want to write. Teacher Abao saw what I was thinking and encouraged me to say, "Since I have come to class, please feel at ease to write." In this way, I still had a needle that was too late to be removed after the infusion, and I endured the pain. This lesson. I want to praise myself.
——Fall third grade Xiao Rui "Like Yourself"
[Abao's comment] was taken from my side. The moment Xiao Rui who was late that day came to the classroom, I almost didn’t recognize it because The cheek on the left is obviously swollen and very high. I can see the determination of the child to stick to the class. When the child's thinking appeared "power failure", I made a call. Xiao Rui overcame the difficulties and wrote this special diary.
The third category: Diary materials on the sports field
The sports field is a place for children to fly.There are endless stories on the sports field.
➽ 13.【Diary sentence】 Finally it's my turn to shoot. I pretend to be good at kicking (actually I don't know how to kick at all). The football kicked crookedly without suspense. I thought to myself: This is really a shame, I must make a small determination to meet the second challenge. The second challenge began. I closed my eyes, adjusted my breathing, stared at the goal, and kicked hard. "Wow!" I actually kicked in! I myself can't believe my eyes. My classmates praised me as "Shadless Foot".
——Autumn third grade Zitong (female) "I am a "Shadow Foot""
【Abao's comment】 Practice shooting in PE class, and turn out to be a happy victory. Diary materials are taken from one's own side, expressing real emotions.
➽ 14.【Diary Golden Sentence】 started to practice, we lined up and walked around. Although the teacher did not say to compete, but I want to compete with other groups, and also speed up. But when it was my turn, the classmate in front of me kicked the ball crookedly, so I ran to pick it up and continued to play. Because I was distracted, I missed a stake. In this way, I failed in the first round, and I shyly lined up to the end of the line.
-Fall third grade Ogawa "Unforgettable queuing and winding"
[Abao's comment] The football winding in physical education class made the young author really like it, and it can also be seen that the young author is very motivated , Wholeheartedly want to win. Truly recorded my own experience.
➽ 15.【Diary Golden Sentence】 Because none of the teachers came. I formed a continuous jumping group with other classmates. In the beginning, we jumped intermittently. Later, we jumped better and smoother. Our "jumping" attracted other students to join, and the number of people increased from three to seven. At this time, the teacher came to us and filmed the scene of our "jumping".
——Fall third grade Xiaolu "Interesting Big Break"
[Abao's comment] wrote about the formation of a continuous jump group during the break, drawing materials from him. Including the videos shared by teachers and classmates in the following article, the girls were also praised and get the long rope that everyone likes to jump every day. This reflects the children's true thoughts on their favorite big break projects.
The fourth category: "forced" diary materials
This is derived from a specially arranged teaching session in my class-"Universal Diary Method". My example text is as follows:
Thursday, September 23, sunny
Why can't I write a diary
I feel so bad now, I can't write a diary, and I watch others export it. I could only envy silently, and had no choice but to type a few words on the Internet, but after hitting the keyboard, it took a long time to write the beginning on the screen.
Why can't I write a diary? This question has been in my mind for a long time. I once asked the almighty "Du Niang", and the answer she gave me was to observe things in life carefully, express my inner feelings, and describe what I saw and heard. Oh, so I did. When I saw a beautiful flower and wanted to express my "love" for her,I am overjoyed, thinking that the inspiration has finally come. I happily returned home. After I picked up the pen, I hesitated again. What should I write? How to start? I began to fall into boundless irritability again-this is a bad habit I have developed for many years, as long as I can't write a diary, I start to get sulking-it is like a plate of delicious food in front of you, but it is covered by a glass The cover is over, making you salivate and not eaten, I am in this state now.
all say that reading has broken ten thousand books. If there is a god in writing, I think I have read a lot of books, but why can’t I have a good time when I start writing? I am envious of those people who can quickly conceive and develop emotions as soon as I pick up a pen, and then I can quickly write and write with a single wave. That is a height that I can't reach, and I also aspire to be this kind of person. I hope I can write an excellent diary like everyone else.
Several children have accepted this "challenge". Two paragraphs are selected:
➽ 16. [Diary Golden Sentence] got in touch, so this made her mother a little worried. Teacher Abao. Teacher A Bao happily accepted this "sweet task", and that's why we had this conversation. ②I don't know why, this time the "carton" is particularly serious. When everyone made a "rustle" under the tip of each pen, I became more and more anxious. My feet stomped on the ground uncomfortably, but the pen in my hand couldn't write a word, and even my tears rolled in my eyes. When Teacher Abao discovered all this, he paused to "answer questions" to the "enthusiastic" students, switched to the courseware, and asked me to refer to the sample essay "Why Can't I Write a Diary" above. My mood stabilized, and I started to write down.
——Autumn third-grade Xiaoli ""Keep Resuscitation" and "Stuck""
[Abao's comment] wrote a conversation between teachers and students that day,The material is taken from the side, which belongs to the "real-time and live" material, and the expression is also more interesting.
➽ 17.【Diary Golden Sentence】 ①Today, when the sky is clear, my heart feels "dark clouds". Oh no! It should be "pouring rain". Because how uncomfortable it is not to write a diary. ②But when I was thinking about how to write, the diary material in my head was "cleared" just like my mother cleaned the room. I really envy the other classmates when the teacher communicates with us, even an ordinary ant can write a good diary.
-Fall third grade Xiao Wu "How uncomfortable it is to not write a diary"
[Abao's comment] The author is good at applying what he has learned, and is able to carry out a special example written by the teacher in class The re-architecting makes it interesting to read.
Finally, I want to emphasize that writing a diary is that "interesting" is more important than "meaningful".
[Original statement] Please respect the original work, and refuse to reprint without the consent of the author.
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