Try
—Talking with Knife Five to raise a dog
Xia Jie
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dog's
s she gave "corn" to relatives
I made "Beibei" lose the power of being a mother, after these happened
We all cried, and felt sorry for
Yes, why can't I try it and make it a mother
Let it lick them, feed them, can I rape me, protect them
I just looked at
for it happiness. I should try
After raising it for a while, can I bear to give them
give them one by one
instruct them to love them
If you don't want to love
, I'll give it to me
Why do I
want to make all this arbitrary
disappear, The power of a mother
deprives her, letting her pink belly
leave a scar. Every time I see
makes me
heartache, regret
htt ml4 I say love, I can't control
Maybe we human
is like this to stop thinking about other people's future
She said that "corn" mother was hit and killed by a car
. It had given birth to five puppies ml6
The neighbor said that if no one wants it, he would throw it into the river.
2022.11.23
Sangushi After reading it,
This poem touched me.
It reminds me of a puppy I once raised - Xiao Hei. When Xiao Hei left for special reasons, the six of his family didn't have dinner that night and all cried. Because I don’t want to have the pain of giving up anymore, I will no longer raise dogs for 40 years.
Thank you poet Xia Jie for sharing this song "Try" in his circle of friends. It made me shed tears of long separation this morning, and let me relive the old love with Xiao Hei, who was called "the general of black robe" by my elder brother, and once again dig out so many crystal and juicy tears and truth in my heart, and so dazzling in the sun.
The poet actually recorded a chat with the poet Daobawu, then added his own emotional salt, and integrated it into a poem. It seemed that it took less effort, but a delicate poem appeared in the circle of friends.
Following the development of emotions, I consider this little poem as a story poem or a children's poem. The reason is: they told a story separately, and Xia Jie shared it; children or children's hearts would accept the poem, and even hug it and put it on their chest or cheek.
Frost said that people love love because of its reality. Xia Jie was deeply impressed by the essence and used the real penetration and bonding power of emotion to create a poem that is both joyful and warm. The whole poem is not complicated, nor is it profound or obscure. The poet is talking to himself or whispering to "you". There seems to be a knife in the poem, killing you one after another, making you hurt, making you dizzy in the world where empathizes with , and even immersed in the integration and symbiosis between man and nature. The first section of the poem
is equivalent to explaining the background of the story. Two highly emotional names are meaningful. The five dogs with knife-handled hands are called "corn" and are things that can provide nutrition. The poet Xia Jie called him "Beibei", which was the child's name. And their ending is equally cruel: one is given to a relative, the other makes it lose the right to be a mother.This sad tone is from this poem and from the poet.
Sections 2 and 3 consist of two "whys". In fact, this is responding to the title of the poem "Try it". Why can't I "try it"? The poet blames himself and asks himself, and the poet's assumption that "let it be a mother once | let it lick them, feed them, can abuse me, protect them", makes the poet only "look at from a distance" and cannot speak or act. The poet even didn't believe in himself anymore and kept asking himself: "After raising it for a while, can he give it away | give it to others one by one." "If you don't want to love, please give it back to me." Such a contradictory poet allows poetry to be achieved in contradiction and can be deepened and superimposed.
And in the third section, the poet uses this true knife to hurt himself and ask himself. The dog's "a scar" was actually engraved in the poet's heart. The two "whys" make the poet's inner world clearly present to readers. This transparency is the sharper the more transparent it is. It not only shakes the eyes, but also pulls off the torrential tears.
The poet's cleverness lies in not stopping at the climax of the plot.
First, the poet insists on attacking himself. To destroy oneself to "Bebe"'s power to be a mother is parallel to "that is how we humans want to break up thinking about other people's future", so that "Bebe" and "others" are on the same list. In fact, this is to attribute yourself to "all kinds of things". How urgent is it to pray for "all kinds of things to compete for freedom in the frost sky"!
2 The ending of the second is like a raccoon. The subtitle of the poem "Talking about Raising a Dog with Knife Barber Five", and explained the past and present life of the dog with Knife Barber Five. She said - "Cru"'s mother was hit and killed by a car / she gave birth to five puppies / the neighbor said that if no one wanted it, she would throw it into the river." This steep plot talks about fate, it belongs to dogs and humans.
This ups and downs of fate is nothing more than in our own hands. She gave "Cru" to relatives, and Xia Jie made "Bebe" lose the power to be a mother.
Thinking of this, I actually thought of my little black. It must have been my life. But I am not as good as the poet Xia Jie. He explained everything clearly, and I retained it in "Little Black Festival". The part I dodge is the truth I deliberately hide.
Wow! Cry for a while.
About the author
Xia Jie, a member of the Chinese Writers Association . His poetry works were published in domestic pure literary journals such as " Poetry Magazine " and " Star ". They were selected and awarded many times. They published three personal collections of poems, "Thinking of Dust", "Silent Sayings", and "Gratitude".
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Reading poet
Sangu Stone is a poet lover. Reading poetry is her habit. It has her paradox and subjectivity. She likes to read poetry from a folk perspective or his perspective. If you see that it catches up with the day when her words go off, please understand.
