[Zhuge Miaoji]
Narratives that focus on writing about people should pay attention to the basic information introduction of the characters and portrait descriptions, descriptions of interests and hobbies, descriptions of behaviors, etc. When introducing the basic information of a character, it is usually necessary to introduce the character's age, occupation, place of origin, etc. When
describes a portrait of a character, it usually describes its appearance characteristics, such as: figure, body shape, hair (length, color, hairstyle), face shape, skin color, eyes, clothing, expression, etc. There is no need to cover everything when describing. Generally, you should grasp the more obvious characteristics of the characters to describe. When describing a person's appearance, use the present tense.
When describing hobbies, you can talk about his/her hobbies, personality traits, etc. When describing actions, be careful to use the correct tense based on when the thing you are describing happened.
[Wonderful Articles]
Yao Ming— My Favorite Star
Everyone knows Yao Ming—a great basketball player. He comes from Shanghai and all the Chinese people are proud of him. He is my favorite star.
Yao Ming was born in 1980. He is tall and strong--he is 2. 26 meters tall. People call him"Little Giant"".
He likes playing basketball and he works hard at it. In his free time, he likes playing computer games and getting online. Sometimes he chats with his fans online. He is always polite and helpful. I hope that I can be a basketball player like Yao Ming one day!
Yao Ming——My favorite star
Everyone knows Yao Ming——a great basketball player. He is from Shanghai and all Chinese people are proud of him. He is my favorite star.
Yao Ming was born in 1980. He is 2.26 meters tall and strong. People call him "little giant".
He likes to play basketball and practices very hard. In his free time, he likes to play computer games and surf the Internet. Sometimes he chats with his fans online. He is always polite and helpful.
I hope I can become one too. Basketball players like Yao Ming!
[Famous Teacher Comments]
This is a narrative essay about a person. Its highlight is that it briefly describes a vivid character.
The first paragraph points out the name of the character (Yao Ming). , occupation (a basketball player), place of origin (Shanghai), and explained the reasons why he likes this character, using a good phrase be proud of sb.
The second paragraph introduces his age and figure. It focuses on describing his outstanding feature - height, and also writes what people call him: little giant. Although there are few pen and ink, the description is vivid. The third paragraph of
describes his interests (playing basketball computer games) and personality traits (polite and helpful), making Yao Ming's vivid image vivid on the page. The fourth paragraph of
describes his wishes. In fact, it is another form of question, explaining his admiration for Yao Ming.
[ word memorization bar ]
1. Phrases describing appearance:
good-looking good-looking
a round/square/long face-Zhang Yuan/square/long face
a handsome boy a handsome boy
have red/brown hair long red /Brown hair
have straight/curly hair
have a ponytail
have long black hair
have two bunches
with long hair
have dark -brown eyes have dark brown eyes
wear a pair of glasses wear glasses
wear a smile wear a smile
have a flat nose have a flat nose
wear a beard have a beard
a pretty/ beautiful/ charming girl a pretty/charming girl Girls
2. Phrases to describe body shape:
tall and strong
short and fat
of medium height
small and skinny
1.78 metres tall
with long arms and legs Long arms and legs
3. Phrases to describe personality traits:
polite and helpful
hard-working
generous and patient
have a strong will
humorous and creative
4. Phrases to describe hobbies:
play computer games play computer games
play cards/chess/football play cards/chess/play football
play the piano/violin play the piano/play the violin
chat with friends
watch TV/films watch TV/movies
go swimming go swimming
be good at ... /do well in ...good at .....do well at .....
5. Sentence:
She is a pretty gird with ...she is .... A beautiful girl with certain appearance characteristics).
He is ... and ready to help ohers.
We are proud of this .. boy We are proud of this .. boy.
He... at the age of... (some activity or hobby).
He used to... last year. He used to... (hobbies or habits) last year.
6.paragraph appreciation bar
★ Wang Lihong is a handsome guy. He is very good at singing. He loves music. He can play the piano, the guitar and the violin. He has many good ideas about music. He is always busy. He likes singing for the people in different countries,
王leehom is a handsome young man. He is very good at singing. He loves music. He can play the piano, guitar and violin. He had a lot of good ideas about music. He was always busy and loved singing for people from all over the world.
★Jim is a fifeen-year-old boy. He is not very tall but he is strong. He is a member of the swimming Club. He swims once a week.He likes flying kites at the weekend. He is good at maths and is a good helper of our teachers.
Jim is a 15-year-old boy. He is not very tall, but he is very strong. He is a member of the swimming club. He swims once a week. He likes to fly kites on the weekends. He is very good at mathematics and is a good helper for teachers.
7.Excellent sample essay
Our Monitor
①Ou monitor is 15 years od. His name is Ge Yang, but we always call him "Sun", because he is a "sunny boy".
②He is a tall and thin boy. He thas big eyes, a flat nose and a smal mouh. He has shortblack hair. He can't see things clearly, so he often wears glasses.
③He likes music very much and he is very good at it. He often lists to music atler school.④He is helpful and he likes helping others. ⑤So we all like him.
Comments:
①The first paragraph concisely informs the squad leader’s name (Ge Yang), age (15 years od), and also explains how others treat him through his nickname (Sun) love.
②The second paragraph is mainly about appearance description.The article describes his body shape (tall and thin) and facial features (bigeyes; a flat nose; a small mouth)
③ This sentence expresses his hobby (is good at music).
④This sentence expresses his personality characteristics (helpful).
⑤ Through the description of the above aspects, it explains everyone’s views on him (all like him).
Translation:
Our monitor
Our monitor is 15 years old. His name is Ge Yang, but we all call him "Sun" because he is a sunny boy. He is tall and thin. He has big eyes, a flat nose, a small mouth, and short black hair. He has poor eyesight, so he often wears glasses.
He loves music very much and is very good at it. He often listens to music after school. He is very helpful and likes to help others. So we all like him.
8.[Real Examination Room]
If you are Li Qiang, your American pen pal Shirley is learning Chinese. She introduced her Chinese teacher in her letter to you. Please write a letter in English based on the information below to introduce your English teacher MissLi to her.
①Appearance: tall, slim, smart
②Favorite color:
blue
③Hobbies:
reading, traveling
④Personality (Personality):
helpful, patient
⑤Achievements:
first prize in the teaching competition
requirement:
1.number of words Around 80. The beginning and end of the letter have been given and are not included in the total number of words;
2. Real names of people, school names and other relevant information must not appear in the text;
3. Make appropriate use of the information given, requiring clear organization, coherent semantics, and neat handwriting. .
Dear Shirley，
Thank you for telling me something ahout your Chinese teacher. l think he has a good sense of humour. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Miss Li. 】
Essay title:
My Best Friend
Roger Federer —the New Tennis King
Roger Federer was born in Switzerland in 1981. He is very handsome and is 1. 85 meters tall. He likes tennis very much. He spends much time practicing it every day.
" Roger Federer will be world No. 1." Sampras said this in 2000. Sampras was the best tennis player at that time. And Federer was only 19 years then.
In 2003, Federer won the Wimbledon Open. In 2004, he won the Open again. And he became the No. 1 player in the world. In 2005, Federer was still the winner of the Open.
The Swiss young man was very happy. “It's the third time. So it's very special. ”Federer beat Andy Roddick in the final. "Andy is a great player. But I did play my best.
Federer has good skills. "I seldom make mistakes in the game. So I can always win. "
Federer likes lions very much. "Lions are great animals No other animals can beat them. So I want to be a' lion', too.
Roger. Federer A new tennis king
Roger Federer was born in Switzerland in 1981. He is handsome and 1.85 meters tall. He loves tennis very much and spends long hours practicing every day.
"Roger Federer will become the world's number one." In 2000, Sampras said this. Sampras was the best tennis player of his time. Federer was only 19 years old at the time.
In 2003, Federer won the Wimbledon championship. In 2004, he successfully defended his title in the Wimbledon competition. And he has become the number one tennis player in the world. In 2005, the Wimbledon men's singles championship still belonged to him.
The Swiss guy is very happy. "This is my third time (winning this tournament), so it's special." Federer defeated Andy in the final. roddick. "Andy is a great player, but I really played my best."
Roger.Federer is very skilled. "I rarely make mistakes in my matches, so I always win."
Federer loves lions. He said: "Lions are very powerful and other animals cannot defeat them. So I also want to be a 'lion'"
