Hello everyone, I am writing an essay with famous works. This is my 281st original article. As we grow older and accumulate knowledge, many students can already write essays with more fulfilling content, and even try to write sentences similar to dual or parallelism. However, the

Hello everyone, I am writing an essay with famous works. This is my 281st original article.

As we grow older and accumulate knowledge, many students can already write essays with more fulfilling content, and even try to write sentences similar to dual or parallelism. However, these sentences always feel stiff and have no literary talent when read.

Please read the following passage, which describes the scene of a study group in the class coming to the podium to memorize. Let’s feel it:

Everyone looks very nervous. Xie Junhan's hands kept rubbing the corners of his clothes, Wang Kairui's eyes kept looking left and right, and Wang Hexuan's head was always lowered. Although this passage of

doesn’t seem to be very wrong on the surface, it always feels like it is still unsatisfactory when read. Moreover, if written in this format, this passage can be endlessly cycled like a Russian doll. Just write about who did what actions. Similarly, you can also write down the character's expression and language infinitely. This is simply a blessing for students who do not write enough words!

However, is this kind of sentence that does not require any brains to write, beautiful?

Let’s enjoy the paragraphs in the classics together.

We also love small animals, but we can't afford to raise thrush and indigo chin , and we don't have time to raise green grasshoppers for winter. Only a few sparrows fell on jujube tree , then flew to the windowsill, looked into the house and looked at . (From Lao She "Under the Red Flag")

If ordinary people are asked to describe this scene, it is estimated that many people will end up writing "fly to the windowsill after a while". However, Mr. Lao She was unique and specifically mentioned another action of the sparrow - looking into the house, deliberately breaking the balance of the sentence structure, bringing unexpected joy to the readers. At the same time, this sentence also acts as a transitional sentence, which naturally connects the paragraph with the description of the scene in the following room.

It seems that designs an extra action for the characters at the end of the paragraph based on the following content, which is a great transitional sentence writing technique.

We can change the beginning paragraph to this:

Everyone looks very nervous. Xie Junhan's hands kept rubbing the corners of his clothes, Wang Kairui's eyes kept looking left and right, Wang Hexuan's head was always lowered, just occasionally looked up and glanced at the audience who was sitting in the seat.

Look, at the end, designing an action like for characters can perfectly turn to the following text and fully describe the audience's performance!

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