Hospital bedside meeting
▎Yequan
Preface: My father-in-law was hospitalized due to illness and stayed in bed at night. Diabetes and heart disease are associated with unstable blood. There are many tests, and a stack of documents are stacked every day. Before retirement, the old man was in charge of supplying supplies in the factory, handling thousands of supplies and countless approvals. Now, only the bed card of the hospital bed is a real signature that can be seen.
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The leaves begin to cool down, and the moon is like frost in the window.
Pre-bed medication as directed by the doctor, and focused on measuring blood sugar.
The whispers are hard to explain, and the indicators are too far-fetched.
cells compete for red and white, each earning dozens of lists.
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The phone suddenly woke up from vibrating, and asked in front of the monitor screen.
pump carries glycerol heart and keeps calm, and blows oxygen to dream of peace.
I used to remember the years, but all the past years have passed.
The subordinates have issued millions of letters, but the bed is left to identify their name.
◆ Author profile ◆
Guo Hongwei, pseudonym Yequan. Male, Han nationality. Member of the Chinese Poetry Society and Shanxi Poetry Society; Member of the Shanxi Tang Huai Poetry Society and Jin society. Currently engaged in industrial automation system design.
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Regular verse is bound by rhythms such as tone, rhyme and parallelism, and is limited by the number of words and sentences, so it is difficult to tell stories. The natural scenery is almost written, and the space to express your feelings is limited. Since the Song Dynasty, it has tried its best to move closer to "discussion" and "learning". The modern trend of "Tongguang" among the elders, older generation revolutionaries and scholars intersecting and discussing together is so popular that the world is full of good things. Although there are many good things in it, the overall taste of poetry cannot be avoided.
These two seven-character poems are of great significance. Each couplet has a certain narrative nature and writes a profound life emotion, but the narrative and subjective evaluations are like shadows. Sometimes it is difficult to tell where the narrative is and where the discussion is. Life is not perfect, joy, anger, sorrow and joy are all poetic materials. Being good at discovering poetry from life and expressing it artistically is the useful inspiration brought to us by these two poems.
In addition, there are several things that can be tempered, such as the metaphor of "the moon is like frost" is too familiar. "The past years" and "the past years" mean similar, which is to put together your hands.
—— Mo Zhenbao
◆ Expert Profile ◆
Mo Zhenbao: Born in 1971, from Changde, Hunan, doctor of literature, head of the Academic Department of the State Council Consultant Office and the Central Academy of Literature and History Research.
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