Nowadays, more and more high school essays project the perspective of investigation into social reality and explore young people’s attitudes and views on current social events. As a result, current commentary essays are very popular.
's so-called current commentary article is to initiate a discussion on a certain phenomenon or event in current society, requiring students to clarify their opinions or put forward their own suggestions.
Many students say that it is difficult to write a current review essay. In fact, the essence of a current review essay is the "material argumentative essay" we have been writing. However, the current review essay pays more attention to "comment" and "argumentation" than the material argumentative essay. As long as the review part is written well , a current review article is ready.
The 10 commentaries selected for the babies today are all wonderful commentaries (excerpts) written on recent hot news events. I hope they can give you some inspiration.
1. Title: "Selling peaches by yourself" reflects the glory of human nature
Incident: Xinjiang fruit stall owner Mu Xiaoyong was isolated at home due to the epidemic. He was worried that a ton of fresh peaches purchased from other places would spoil, so he asked community cadres to deliver the peaches to community residents. Unexpectedly, community cadres "promoted" him among the residents, and thus opened an "unmanned selling" fruit stall. Residents picked peaches, scanned the QR code, and paid. A ton of fresh peaches was quickly sold, but no one escaped. Just take advantage.
review highlights: This is not a business miracle, but a two-way journey of trust.
The fruit stall owner Mu Xiaoyong in the report said that during the epidemic, the fruits would rot if they were not sold or eaten, so he immediately made an honest and kind choice and selflessly gave a cart of fresh peaches to community cadres. The residents eat. Community cadres and residents are also willing to repay the fruit stall owners with greater goodwill and integrity. You have 1 kilogram, and I have 2 kilograms to solve his urgent need. Each other's kindness and integrity have created a two-way flow of trust and generated huge motivation. There is no mercy for the epidemic.
After all, in life, everyone will inevitably encounter natural and man-made disasters, joys and sorrows, which affect life and mood, but different moods and choices will attract completely different results and lives. People who are kind-hearted and choose integrity will always reap different surprises from the adversities in life and bring the strength to move forward.
sells peaches, which reflects human nature. No matter how hard life is, as long as a person is kind and honest, the beauty of interpersonal relationships and the sweetness of love will never disappear, and a person's life will not be dimmed because of this. People are individuals who belong to society. I believe that when everyone is honest, the trust of the entire society will definitely increase, and the core values of socialism will definitely shine. ——Cheng Zhidan of Oriental Network
2. Title: A large number of cold drinks of love were removed. Only by not letting go of "little evil" can we live up to our good deeds
Incident: Mr. Zhu, a merchant from Fujian, set up a free "cold drink stall of love" in front of his store to let him The puzzling thing is that sometimes water is consumed very quickly. After checking the surveillance, it was found that a large amount of "love water" was moved away, and someone even rode an electric bicycle to move three boxes at a time. Highlights of the review of
: The public order and good customs of and in society need to be maintained by everyone. A thousand-mile embankment is destroyed by an anthill. Condoning uncivilized behavior may bring bad social atmosphere and lower the moral bottom line.
Why does the trivial matter of a few bottles of water cause public anger? The key point is that living in a good society where "everyone is for one and one is for everyone" is everyone's expectation. Only by not letting caring people feel cold, not letting good deeds be let down, and by giving discipline and punishment to "little evils" can we maintain the dam that builds a strong and honest society.
The height of social civilization depends on adhering to the bottom line where others cannot see it. I hope that everyone can convey the warmth of " gives roses to others, and the fragrance lingers in your hands" and rejects the coldness of selfishness. Only in a society full of trust can everyone have a sense of security in life.——Red Star Comment WeChat official account Ruge
3. Title: The hospital’s display of “recruiting wealth and treasures” is not appropriate, and it is more important to repair the trust rift
Event: Recently, the words “recruiting wealth and treasures” appeared on the ornaments in the lobby of Qilu Hospital of Shandong University The matter caused controversy.
review highlights: Countless netizens have expressed dissatisfaction with this and complained. It is definitely not because of moral mysophobia, but because the "recruitment of wealth" is too eye-catching, making people feel that this is not a company that "holds high the banner of public welfare and has the courage to take on responsibilities". A hospital that performs emergency tasks and strives to be a benchmark in medical teaching and research is more like a profit-seeking enterprise.
Relevant hospitals need to reflect not only on whether they should place such objects, but also on how to repair the cracked trust. If you are not patient-centered and do not treat patients well, what good will it do even if you place items in the lobby that say "treat patients like family members"?
A hospital is a place where people save lives and heal the wounded. It is a place where life is dealt with. It cannot be filled with the smell of copper. If you really care about patients, even if you don’t put up any decorations or hang any banners, what’s the harm? ——Red Star Review WeChat account Qinchuan
4. Title: "Mountain City Fire Fighting Knight", showing the responsibility of contemporary young people
Incident: Mountain fires have occurred in many districts of Chongqing. Due to the inconvenience of mountain roads, the transportation of rescue supplies has become a problem. Local people volunteered to ride motorcycles up the mountain to transport supplies and fire-fighting equipment. They were called "mountain fire-fighting knights" and made great contributions to controlling the fire. Among these people are motorcycle drivers, takeaway riders, corporate employees, and local villagers.
review highlights: The so-called heroes are just ordinary people around us who are a little more brave and a little more dedicated when danger strikes. However, this is also what makes them valuable. They prove that ordinary people can have a great heart.
In the face of disaster, do not be a bystander, but lend a hand and help - a simple starting point, but it gathers powerful power.
"Mountain City Firefighting Knight" vividly demonstrates people's ability to provide support with practical actions in emergencies, as well as the strong cohesion of the Chinese people in the face of disasters.
Youth will shine only if you have responsibility and responsibility. No matter what profession the "Mountain City Firefighting Knights" are engaged in in reality and what situations they face in life, at this moment, they have won people's admiration with their actions. The hurried figures of will definitely inspire more people to polish the background of the times with responsibility and responsibility, and inspire the brilliance of youth with actions and dedication like them. ——Lizhi Ruiping WeChat public account Shu Shengxiang
5. Title: "Bear Parent" kicked and injured a woman watching a movie, and it was his own child who was harmed.
Incident: The Shanghai Songjiang Public Security Bureau received a call from a woman saying that she was watching a movie in a theater. , a man in the back row kicked the back of the chair and felt dizzy.
While the woman was watching a movie, a little boy sitting in the back row continued to kick her chair for 20 minutes. She turned around several times to stop her, but to no avail. Unexpectedly, the boy's father suddenly kicked her chair hard, causing her to be hit on the back of the head. arrive. After the show, when the woman was communicating with the other party's family of four, the father who kicked the chair not only showed no guilt, but also rushed over to hit her from a distance.
review highlights: In their young minds, children may feel that not only is there nothing wrong with kicking the chairs in the front row while watching a movie, but there is also nothing wrong with physically violently attacking others. This is what the parent "taught" his children by example in this incident. He may have thought that he had won, gaining domineering, airy, and relieved anger, but little did he know that he had "lost a lot." He not only hurt the front-seat passenger, but also "poisoned" his own child. This kick not only hit the back of the front seat, but also left a mark on the child's memory. It may even become a stumbling block for the child's growth.
"Performing" violence in front of children is neither a way to resolve disputes nor can it demonstrate a father's "responsibility" in front of his children.
People should have a sense of public reverence: in public places, they should have the minimum self-restraint. - Chengdu Commercial Daily Fan Cheng
6. Title: Off-roading cannot turn into wild behavior, and suppression cannot stop at exposure
Incident: Recently, the Jiaoding Mountain Scenic Area in Hanyuan, Sichuan was publicly exposed that "12 vehicles rolled over an alpine meadow regardless of dissuasion." One thing attracted attention.
review highlights: In a sense, exposing those people and things that "run wild" in the scenic area is a valuable reminder and education. But mere exposure may not be enough to deter. Faced with the repeated chaos that destroys the ecological environment of scenic spots, some experts have suggested that under the framework of the Tourism Law, various localities can introduce local regulations such as civilized tourism regulations, and further specify the content that is not stipulated or not specified in the Tourism Law and other national legislation. ization and form effective ecotourism resource management methods.
It is everyone's responsibility to cherish this beautiful land. Whether it is the mist-shrouded alpine meadows, the vivid and vivid Jiuzhaigou Valley, or other ecological scenic spots, they are all the accumulation of history, beautiful landscapes formed over time, and part of the fragile ecosystem. The formation and continuation of every scenic spot requires the careful protection of every tourist. Being in the embrace of nature is both a kind of enjoyment and a kind of responsibility. We cannot let ignorance let down the beautiful scenery and let fearlessness trample on the bottom line. - Rule of Law Daily WeChat public account Liu Dan
7. Title: It’s time for blind boxes to bid farewell to the “blind” growth
Event: On August 16, the State Administration for Market Regulation issued the “Guidelines for the Standardization of Blind Box Business Activities (Trial)” Public opinions are solicited, and it is planned to regulate the content, form and sales targets of blind box sales.
review highlights: "Once you enter the blind box, it is as deep as the sea, and your wallet is a passerby from now on." Why is the small blind box so addictive? The uncertainty of blind boxes has piqued the curiosity of consumers. Many people are obsessed with enjoying the surprise brought by opening the blind boxes and the satisfaction of collecting a complete set.
Under the trend of blind boxes for everything, blind boxes have brought new consumption experiences to consumers and created new consumption topics for merchants. However, the rapidly growing blind box industry has gradually exposed chaos.
draws a "red line" for blind box marketing, which will push the blind box industry to bid farewell to "barbaric growth" and return to rational development; the legitimate rights and interests of consumers will be better protected, and companies with standardized operations will have a clearer development direction, and Companies that are non-compliant and rely on shoddy manufacturing to deceive consumers will be eliminated from the market at an accelerated pace. In the final analysis,
blind box is an innovation in external marketing methods. If you play it too much, consumers' enthusiasm will inevitably decrease. The long-term development of blind boxes will eventually return to the inside. A very important reason why Chaowan is loved by the public is IP. Intensive cultivation of blind box IP, injecting personalized connotation, and making it deeply rooted in the hearts of the people may be the essence that supports the continued popularity of blind boxes. ——Economic Daily Zhang Xue
8. Title: Moutai mooncakes are priced at 700 yuan per box, is it necessary?
Incident: There is still half a month before the Mid-Autumn Festival. The "Moutai Mooncakes" launched by Moutai International Hotel have already been sold out, and have even been speculated at "sky-high prices" on online platforms. In the second-hand market, a Moutai Liuxin mooncake gift box with a price of 318 yuan per box is sold by scalpers for more than 700 yuan per box.
review highlights: Such a sky-high price for mooncakes means that what a box of mooncakes sells is no longer its actual value, but a lot of unfounded added value, causing the strange phenomenon of "people who eat don't buy it, and people who buy it don't eat it", which not only intensifies The false prosperity of the market may also bring about undesirable phenomena such as extravagant gift giving.
The supervision by relevant departments is timely and meaningful. Consumers should also stay awake and not be blinded by the hype of some merchants and platforms, so that they blindly follow the trend and rush to buy.
The emergence of sky-high Moutai mooncakes also reminds us once again: major mooncake manufacturers and related companies should devote their energy to improving product quality and craftsmanship and taste, instead of trying to get rid of and avoid supervision. It’s not about making huge profits by hyping a concept or brand. returns mooncakes to their original meaning and allows consumers to have a happy Mid-Autumn Festival with peace of mind, which is more important than anything else. —— Guangming Daily WeChat official account Yu Xiao
9. Title: "Law Enforcement Questions" raised by 5 pounds of celery and a fine of 66,000 yuan
Incident: A vegetable, grain and oil store owner in a certain city failed to pass the quality inspection of the celery he sold, and the purchase receipt was lost and he could not explain the source. , violated relevant provisions of the Food Safety Law and was fined 66,000 yuan by the local market supervision department. After questioning by the inspection team, the local market supervision department admitted that the punishment was inappropriate.
Highlights of the review: It is natural to protect the safety of the public and maintain market order. However, law enforcement cannot only focus on intensity, but also on temperature and the integration of law, reason and emotion. and often the latter, which best reflects the level of law enforcement and will also affect people's intuitive feelings about a society ruled by law.
For the parties concerned, humane law enforcement is more convincing than cold law enforcement; for the surrounding people, warm law enforcement is easier for people to feel the value of the rule of law than simple and blunt law enforcement. Temperature and intensity are not contradictory. Leniency and severity are combined, legal principles are integrated, flexible law enforcement , spring breeze turns into rain, and the authority of the rule of law and the belief in the rule of law will be formed. - Beijing Daily client Hu Yuqi
10. Title: What kind of "heroism" does it take to put out the mountain fires in Chongqing?
Incident: On August 25, in the face of multiple outbreaks and resurgences of mountain fires in Chongqing, firefighting, People's Liberation Army and armed police rescue forces from all directions poured into the fire scene one after another, and gathered at the No. 4 fire isolation zone in Jinyun Mountain to attack The mountain fire launched a general offensive, and finally successfully extinguished the mountain fire using combat methods such as "fighting fire with fire".
Review Highlights: Difficulties are the greatest test of today's people's tolerance for hardships and the best way to condense the national energy determined to struggle. The "New Great Wall" on Jinyun Mountain is the epitome of the mature Chinese society - unity, never sitting back, moving forward without hesitation and compromise.
The people are our country and our backer.
Why are there always the bravest people who stand up and protect us so well? It is precisely because the "ocean of the masses" also protects them who are brave. A nation with a spirit of struggle and self-improvement should be its own "god" - the Chinese never rely on "gods' blessing" and firmly believe in "constant self-improvement."
Who can control the power of the group? The stone of unity can wear it! We have reason to believe that with such a great people, what we lose in disasters today will be compensated in tomorrow’s progress. Chinese people will not just sit back and wait for death in the face of fires. We will actively work hard in the face of any difficulties. Nowadays, Jinyun Mountain in Chongqing is no longer just famous for its grace and grace. The "heroic spirit" of the mountain and the people who unite and move forward forever will be the new footnote of this famous mountain. —— Jun Zhengping Studio Wang Wenbo
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