Read prose by famous writers, appreciate good words and sentences, accumulate materials, and improve your composition skills through imitation. This is a fragment from Mr. Lu Xun's "From Baicao Garden to Sanwei Bookstore".

Read the prose of famous writers, appreciate good words and sentences, accumulate materials, and improve your composition skills through imitation.

Lu Xun's "From Baicao Garden to Sanwei Bookstore"

This is a fragment from Mr. Lu Xun's "From Baicao Garden to Sanwei Bookstore". Mainly recalls various interesting things in Baicao Garden . Although it is just a place full of wild grass, it is a paradise for children.

In my memory, there are too many interesting things in Baicao Garden. Let’s see how Mr. Lu Xun expresses them.

A sentence pattern:

There is no need to say..., there is no need to say..., just....

This sentence pattern is very powerful. It accomplishes two goals:

✔Needless to say...Needless to say...It briefly outlines the things worth mentioning in Baicao Garden, completes the overall summary, and forms the reader's understanding of The impression of Baicao Garden - interesting.

✔Just...pick one of the things to write about. This sentence has the function of connecting the previous and the following, and triggers the interesting anecdotes about the mud wall root that will be written in detail below. At the same time, it also leaves more room for readers to imagine the fun of Baicao Garden.

combine long and short sentences, and combine dynamic and still animals with

short sentences:

The green vegetable border, the smooth stone well column , the tall saponaria tree , the purple mulberry

These are some static things , use a simple " Adjective + thing " is clicked until it is like some frozen photos that are constantly switching.

Long sentence:

Singing cicada Singing in the leaves

Fat wasp Lying on the cauliflower

Calling the emperor suddenly from the grass to the sky

These are some dynamic things , adds sound, adds action , and the sentences become longer and longer, like a continuous video shot.

combines long and short sentences, and the article reads with rhythm changes.

combines dynamic and still life to describe scenes that are not monotonous. Especially when I read "The emperor suddenly jumped from the grass to the sky", the picture is vivid and bright, and there is a sense of surprise.

Summary

When writing narrative compositions such as campus, hometown, travel experiences, etc., is a good starting point. It can not only give a brief summary, but also naturally lead to the key details.

We have extracted this imitation template:

However, let’s count how many things in Baicao Garden did Mr. Lu Xun mention in this short clip? There are as many as 8 types.

Therefore, if you want to imitate this sentence well, you must not only learn the sentence pattern, but also be good at observing and discovering beautiful and interesting things in daily life, and understand and feel the characteristics of these things.