Autumn, the harvest season, the golden season, as cute as the spring when flowers bloom, as passionate as the scorching summer, and as charming as the snowy winter.
The golden autumn sun is warm and comfortable, the golden autumn breeze is gentle and gentle, the golden autumn blue sky and white clouds are flowing, and the golden autumn fields are full of golden. Autumn may be hidden on the golden rice ears, or in the red persimmons, or in the green rapeseed field.
What language do you like to describe autumn? Can you tell me, write it down, and tell your friends?
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Write the beginning
1, start with anthropomorphic method.
Miss summer left quietly, and Miss autumn came quietly, putting beautiful clothes on the fields.
2. Always say that the fields in autumn are beautiful.
How charming the autumn scenery is like a beautiful picture.
3. Start with a comparison method.
Autumn is a season of harvest, with gold shining everywhere and yellow, and the autumn fields are even more extraordinary.
4. Start with fairy tale colors.
The beautiful autumn girl flew towards the beautiful field with a basket of magic petals filled with fragrance. She waved her left hand and spread her right hand. A miracle suddenly appeared, and a charming autumn scene came into people's eyes.
Pig belly
Writing the key segment
Let's first look at two fragments:
Fragment one: Stepping on the path to the field, a cool west wind blows in front of you, and the leaves fly like fairies scattering flowers. The fallen leaves falling on the ground are like naughty children running, rolling, and somersaulting. The persimmon trees along the road were hung with fiery red "lanterns". They were in groups of three and five, and they were intimate. The representative of the fields in autumn is the boundless ears of rice. From a distance, rice ears look like golden oceans. A breeze blew, and the fields were rolling with layers of waves, rolling and rolling, very charming! The rice ears were bent by the heavy fruits, and they were shaking their little heads, as if they were thinking about something.
Fragment 2: Walking into the field is like being in a golden ocean. Under the sunshine, it shines, and the sky and the earth are also integrated, with golden colors everywhere. The growth of rice is very gratifying. Each rice ear has more than 80 grains, and each grain has a big belly that is about to swell, heavy and falling downwards. Its stalk is very thin, but very tough. Although it has been bent, it never lie down. Its roots are like eagle claws, holding on to the earth tightly, allowing the wind and rain to blow without moving at all. Look, the old man over there is harvesting. He skillfully waved his sickle. After a while, the airtight rice fields were cut several ridges, as if they were golden roads leading to happiness. People in the valley in the distance were also busy...
and the two young authors above were children who were carefully observed. They give the autumn fields a different view and depict their own colors.
But they have one common feature:
1. Grasp the most representative scenery in the autumn fields to write
such as: fallen leaves, rice, persimmons... and grasp their features: leaves are flying, persimmons are fiery red, rice is golden...
html l1 2. In addition, some vivid and appropriate metaphor sentences were used
, such as: "Like a fairy scattering flowers", "Walking with fiery red lanterns", "Like a golden ocean", "Roots like eagle claws" to make the autumn scenery more vivid and specific; also used anthropomorphic sentences, such as: "Like a naughty child running, rolling, and somersaulting", "They sway their little heads", "all with big belly that is about to burst", "Although they have been bent, they never lie down and let the wind and rain blow, without moving at all."It makes us feel very friendly.
It seems that the key points of writing this exercise are: First, we must grasp the characteristics of autumn scenery through careful observation; second, we must use some rhetorical techniques such as metaphorical personification and parallelism... to make the article more vivid, and also pay attention to the order of narrative.
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ml4write the ending
1, express your thoughts directly, summarize the full text.
A, Ah! The fields in autumn are so beautiful!
B, What a charming field! I love the fields in autumn!
2. Praise the fields and express joy.
A. The fields in autumn are beautiful, it brings us the joy and laughter of harvest.
B. I love autumn colors, and I love the fields in autumn even more. Because it is full of joy, hope, and vitality.
3. Ending the theme with the labor of praising the good farmers.
The fields of autumn are fields with fruits, fields of harvest, and fields of hope. I praise it because it was created by farmers with hard work and sweat.
The ox cuts down the cow
The ox was cut off by the ox
write the outline
Beginning : How charming the autumn scenery is, like a beautiful picture.
The middle part :
(1) Write about the autumn crop fields. (2) Write about the autumn vegetable fields. (3) Write about the autumn orchard.
Ending : The autumn fields are beautiful, and it brings us the joy and laughter of a harvest.
Finishing the finishing touch
Written the title
"Autumn Fields" "Autumn Campus"
"Autumn Orchard" "Autumn Vegetable Garden"
"Autumn Park"
"Autumn Park"
"Autumn Park"
Gold rush in the sand
Choose the good theme
1. The sun is warm and comfortable, the breeze is gentle, the blue sky and white clouds are flowing, and the geese fly south together...
2. The golden fields. (Golden rice ears, bright red sorghum , full pod ; red persimmons, yellow pears, green rapeseed fields...)
3, beautiful park. (Fire red maple leaves, chrysanthemums in various shapes, dancing fallen leaves...)
words describing the beautiful scenery of autumn
words describing the beautiful scenery of autumn
high and cool autumn Autumn seasons full of red leaves flying south geese flying south Frost leaves know autumn hiding sky clear fruits and fragrant melons and fruits high sky and clear clouds. The golden osmanthus fragrance bleak autumn wind blew the fragrance of osmanthus red fading green waning autumn colors pleasant autumn chrysanthemum 2 blooming golden autumn season northern geese flying south
words describing autumn scenery
grass and trees withered yellow Maple leaves are like fire, full grains, large and small, swaying, dancing, colorful Osmanthus fragrance, fruits are abundant, fruits are fragrant, fallen leaves are flying everywhere, golden, harvest is in sight, crystal clear, colorful, autumn insects chirping, northern geese fly south, heavy
words describing autumn weather
hrefdom brings cool breeze, cloudless, endless The sky is high and the clouds are light
Selected beautiful sentences
1. Golden leaves are like beautiful butterflies flying around in the air.
2. In late autumn, the yellow leaves on the branches were blown away by the autumn wind all night, and it was everywhere, as if a yellow carpet was laid.
3. The fallen leaves began to hold the "Dance Forest Conference". They were wearing bright yellow, dark red and lilac gauze dresses, and they rotated like dozens of butterflies dancing.
4. In autumn, leaves fall one by one, with a hint of regret, thrown into the arms of Mother Earth. They jump, rotate, dance and fly, falling gracefully.
5. The weeping willows wearing long green hair have become yellow and dry today. With the cool autumn wind, fallen leaves are falling down one after another, as if little girls are dancing for tourists.
6. The fallen leaves left their mother and went on a trip alone to experience the colorful life. She wants to use her last strength to interpret the most beautiful music and the most exciting songs in her life.
7. The fallen leaves in autumn are colorful, and the forests are dyed. Even the poet Gong Zizhen said: "Falling reds are not merciless things, they turn into spring mud to protect flowers." I love autumn, I love autumn leaves more!
8. Leaves fall from the big tree, some dance like butterflies, and some look like geese flying with wings. The ground was covered with fallen leaves, like a golden avenue, carrying my dreams to the distance.
9. In autumn, the leaves of the poplar tree are yellow, hanging on the tree, like yellow flowers; falling in the air, like yellow butterflies; falling in the small river beside the tree, like golden boats.
10. In the sky, the leaves of dressing are dancing gracefully. In the mountain stream, the ding dong spring is dancing and singing. Are they silently blessing the autumn flowers? Or are you enjoying this quiet and beautiful warm moment with the autumn flowers?
11. When the first cool wind in the morning floats in from the window and blows on your face, it’s very cool. When the first leaf falls from the branches in the wind, it falls on the ground full of fallen leaves. It seems that I can smell the smell of autumn and hear the sound of autumn. 12. In the golden October, the sparse leaves on the trees dry like dry tobacco leaves. Mother Earth opened her broad mind and was like welcoming and hugging the returned child. The fallen leaves returned to Mother Earth's arms and slept sweetly with the soil.
13. The autumn wind blew, accompanied by a little melancholy in my heart, the leaves were still dancing gracefully, and there was no trace of sadness. In people's eyes, autumn is often sad, but in my eyes, autumn has a strange beauty.
wonderful clips of autumn
1. The leaves of autumn are so colorful, yellow as gold, green as jade, red as fire, etc., which dresses the autumn girl in particular incredible. A cool breeze blew by, and the golden leaves swayed and pulled small fans, floating down from the air, as if telling a beautiful fairy tale.
2. In autumn, in the beautiful melody of autumn thoughts, the strings of life are plucking the fallen leaves of every life. Sometimes, like the slanting earth in a storm, falling down a golden piece of silk, covering the journey of life. Sometimes, like a floating dream girl, gently falling down, unwilling to wake up the sleeping earth, walk quietly, and the dance steps float lightly in the direction of the wind. Precipitation, melting the loneliness and the wandering shadows.
3. Another gust of wind blew, coming so violently and so deep. The maple leaves were rolling around and fell down. I looked at the falling maple leaves and couldn't help but think a lot. The leaves fall without traces. Indeed, the fallen leaves fall down so quietly, silently, without notice.
4. Some people say that the fallen leaves in autumn are withered and have no value. But I don't agree. "Falling red is not a heartless thing, it turns into spring mud to protect flowers." It falls in autumn and dissolves into the soil to become the nourishment for the mother of the big tree, nurturing the hope of spring. I believe that in the tender buds next spring, there must be a faint smile of autumn leaves.
5. A breeze blew, and the leaves on the tree were rustling. I lowered my head and picked up a leaf. The leaf looked like a little hand, and the red on the tip of my head seemed to drip. Hey, why would the maple leaves turn red in autumn? Oh, it turned out that it was because the temperature in autumn was relatively low, which destroyed the chlorophyll in the maple leaves and turned chlorophyll into anthocyanin , so the maple leaves in autumn are red.
6. The autumn wind is like a girl. He quietly came to the world with golden clothes and light steps.Look, the autumn girl came to the field and dyed cotton balls as white as snow. The corn was so happy to see the autumn girl. It specially changed a bunch of golden tassels and grinned, revealing its white teeth. Soybeans might be too excited, but some even laughed out loud. The rice was particularly polite and leaned over to welcome the autumn girl who had been away for a long time. Sorghum has always been afraid of seeing strangers. Now, when she saw the autumn girl, she was embarrassed, and her face turned red.
7. When the autumn wind blows, ginkgo leaves sways with the wind, as if fanning us. At this time, a strange thought penetrated my head: Is the reason why autumn is so cold? Could it be that they are fanned like this? I looked at the ginkgo tree, and it seemed to nod at me. The leaves of the ginkgo tree are light yellow and shaken hard, and the leaves are like yellow butterflies dancing.
8. Miss autumn came to the courtyard. Look. The chrysanthemums compete for beauty, red like fire, yellow like gold, pink like clouds, and white like snow. Walk into the orchard. I saw duck pear containing a variety of nutrients; a bunch of pearl-like grapes turned from green to dark red, round, large and crystal clear, like agate. I picked the grapes and put them in my mouth. It was sweet and sour, with a lot of juice, which was so delicious. Japan tree is covered with shiny and red Japan . It is so sweet and crispy when you take a bite.
9. In late autumn, the prelude of winter has been played between the world. The serenade of autumn rain was so intoxicating that it attracted countless listeners; the hail-stone drum team was ready. Listen, we have already faintly heard the footsteps of their war; look, the snow and rain ballet has begun. The rustling autumn wind is the prelude to winter, and they blow the last sirens to remind wild animals to overwinter.
10. Suddenly, a breeze blew, and a refreshing fragrance came towards me. I came to the orchard unconsciously. The red apples in the orchard smile at people like shy little girls, the yellow pears hang on the branches like gourd , the orange persimmons are very attractive like small lanterns, and the jujubes like red agate are shining, and all kinds of fruits are really mouth-watering.
