【句子結構分析】
後置定語
Beethoven』s habit of increasing the volume with an extreme intensity and then abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage was only rarely used by composers before him.
【重點辭彙】
volume: n. the amount of sound that is produced by a television, radio, etc. 音量;響度
intensity: n. the strength of sth, for example light, that can be measured 強度;烈度
abrupt: adj. sudden and unexpected, often in an unpleasant way 突然的;意外的
composer:n. a person who writes music, especially classical music (尤指古典音樂的)創作者;作曲者;作曲家
【句子翻譯嘗試與思考】
Beethoven』s habit of increasing the volume with an extreme intensity and then abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage was only rarely used by composers before him.
1. 這個句子的結構並不複雜,只是後置定語太長了,所以翻譯的時候,如果按照漢語習慣,翻譯成前置定語,就會頭重腳輕——「貝多芬的……的習慣」,我們把它處理成「貝多芬習慣於……」,這樣就舒服多了。
2. increasing the volume with an extreme intensity and then abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage 這兩個並列結構中,我們抓住兩個動名詞increasing和following,翻譯為:先以極強的力度增加音量,然後突然接續一個驟然舒緩的樂段。
3. 「...was only rarely used by composers before him. 」這是一個被動句,我們中文很少使用被動句,所以翻譯的時候把被動句變為主動句,比較符合漢語語言習慣。
4. 整理翻譯:貝多芬習慣於先以極強的力度增加音量,然後突然接續一個驟然舒緩的樂段,在他之前的作曲家們很少運用這種作曲方式。
如果您有更好的翻譯方法,評論區告訴我哦~