
【句子结构分析】
后置定语
Beethoven’s habit of increasing the volume with an extreme intensity and then abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage was only rarely used by composers before him.
【重点词汇】
volume: n. the amount of sound that is produced by a television, radio, etc. 音量;响度
intensity: n. the strength of sth, for example light, that can be measured 强度;烈度
abrupt: adj. sudden and unexpected, often in an unpleasant way 突然的;意外的
composer:n. a person who writes music, especially classical music (尤指古典音乐的)创作者;作曲者;作曲家
【句子翻译尝试与思考】
Beethoven’s habit of increasing the volume with an extreme intensity and then abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage was only rarely used by composers before him.
1. 这个句子的结构并不复杂,只是后置定语太长了,所以翻译的时候,如果按照汉语习惯,翻译成前置定语,就会头重脚轻——“贝多芬的……的习惯”,我们把它处理成“贝多芬习惯于……”,这样就舒服多了。
2. increasing the volume with an extreme intensity and then abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage 这两个并列结构中,我们抓住两个动名词increasing和following,翻译为:先以极强的力度增加音量,然后突然接续一个骤然舒缓的乐段。
3. “...was only rarely used by composers before him. ”这是一个被动句,我们中文很少使用被动句,所以翻译的时候把被动句变为主动句,比较符合汉语语言习惯。
4. 整理翻译:贝多芬习惯于先以极强的力度增加音量,然后突然接续一个骤然舒缓的乐段,在他之前的作曲家们很少运用这种作曲方式。
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